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[12]#12 Tomoe Pankcakes for Breakfast

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- Purpose: Making My Own Story

- theme: Being patient / Keep trying

 

I. You are going to be a writer now. Look at the pictures of Pancakes for Breakfast.

How many characters do you need to make a good story using the pictures?

Decide the number of characters and give a name of your own to each character.

 

 

 

  

2. Write the events in order using the words given if necessary.

You can use any words you want to use to make the story fun.

 

   the recipe book, flour, eggs, milk, butter, syrup, the chicken pen, shopkeeper,   

   ran out of, asked for, imagined, on her way back home, found, messy, smelled,

   her neighbor                                                                                  

 

1

One morning _____ woke up and decided to have pancakes for her breakfast.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. What is the purpose of your story? I want to make a story saying that

If at first you don’t succeed, try again.” One of my friends,

who is an English teacher in the US, thinks this story is telling us

how many parts are needed to make one good outcome.

I want to hear from you what you wanted to tell from your story above.

 

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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4. This is our last stroy written by Tomie DePaola. Now that you read 12 books

do you feel you know the writer very well? Pick your favorite story out of 12

and tell why you like the story. Let’s see which one will be ranked

as the most favorite Tomie Story by Suksuk Children. This is going to be fun!!

 

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마이 페이지 > 스크랩북에서 확인하실 수 있습니다. 소중한 글에 감사 댓글 남겨주세요.

        
로그인 후 덧글을 남겨주세요
채원맘 2010-10-12 19:03 

채원맘 2010-10-12 19:04:27
카메라가 없어져서 오늘 하루종일 찾았는데... 신랑이 들어와 3분만에 찾았네요. 저 요즘 너무 건망증이 심해서 우울합니다. 늦게 올려 죄송합니다.
주울 2010-10-12 22:36:19
우을증은 댓글수다로 날려 버리삼
채원이 글은 눈을 시원하게 해줍니다 어떤글을 읽을때면 는 오만상을 찌뿌리며 읽거든요...뭔글자인지 생각하느라고요 ^^
홍박샘 2010-10-13 15:44:21
Now One Foot Now the Other 4
James 2010-10-12 15:04 
너무 늦게 올려 죄송 ^^합니당~~

James 2010-10-12 15:05:03
에고 사진도 안보이게 찍혔네요
아이가 수련회 갔다오고 힘들게 했는데...
홍박샘 2010-10-12 15:46:02
Nana Upstairs & Nana Downstairs 2
주울 2010-10-12 16:43:53
제임스 수련회다녀돠서도 열심히 한거 칭찬합니다
이쁜 글씨가 안보여서 쪼매 서운하네요 ^^
nate mom 2010-10-11 22:56 

자꾸 미루다가 이제서야 올리네요..^^

이번 미션은 좀 어려웠나봐요..

생각해서 적는게 아직 서툰가봐요. 창조적이지 못해 좀 엄마입장에서 안타까워요..ㅠㅠ

 

주울 2010-10-12 02:00:38
네이트맘님 그러면 엄마와 같이 책을 읽고 글쓸떄 브레인스토밍 하셔요...
먼저 떠오르는 단어를 많이 적게 해보시고 그것을 바탕으로 롸이팅을 하도록 하십시요...
또다른방법은요 머리속에 떠오르는 생각을 모두다 글로 옮겨보도록 하는것도 있어요^^
홍박샘 2010-10-12 15:45:02
The Night and the Dragon 3
Soomin 2010-10-11 18:18 

 

 

맨위에 1번 문제에 5명이 아니라 4명으로 수정합니다.(5번인 Ms. Happy는 필요없네요.)

 

주울 2010-10-12 02:05:50
수민이는 영어를 참 잘하는구나 미션만 봐도 알겠다 문장이 아주 깔끔하거던^^
열심히 잘했다 칭찬합니다 `
Soomin 2010-10-11 18:18 

 

 

맨위에 1번 문제에 5명이 아니라 4명으로 수정합니다.

Mr.Hapy를 빼겠습니다.

Soomin 2010-10-11 18:18 

 

 

맨위에 1번 문제에 5명이 아니라 4명으로 수정합니다.

Mr.Hapy를 빼겠습니다.

홍박샘 2010-10-12 15:44:23
Nana Upstairs Nana Downstairs 1
Grace 2010-10-11 00:55 

I. You are going to be a writer now. Look at the pictures of Pancakes for Breakfast. How many characters do you need to make a good story using the pictures? Decide the number of characters and give a name of your own to each character.

I need six characters.

*dog: Billy   *cat : Pinky

*the man who has grary hair : Fred.

*the woman who has yellow hair : Muffy

*the woman with a earing : Kate

*the man who gave “Kate”

2. Write the events in order using the words given if necessary. You can use any words you want to use to make the story fun.

 

   the recipe book, flour, eggs, milk, butter, syrup, the chicken pen, shopkeeper,                 

   ran out of, asked for, imagined, on her way back home, found, messy, smelled, her neighbor  

 

1

One morning __I__ woke up and decided to have pancakes for her breakfast.

2

I put out my recipe book and put out the flour.

3

I add some baking power and know that I had no eggs.

4

So I went out and got eggs and know that I had no milk.

5

So I went out again and got milk and put it in a bowl.

6

I mixed and mixed I was tired.

7

I got out the butter and know I had no syrup.

8

So I got out side and got to the shop and got the syrup.

9

I thought I will have a nice breakfast.

10

But when I got home Billy and Pinky made a mass.

11

I thought my breakfast was gone.

12

Then I smelled something and got to the next door.

13

Fred and Muffy were having pancakes so I had eat with them.

 

3. What is the purpose of your story? I want to make a story saying that “If at first you don’t succeed, try again.” One of my friends, who is an English teacher in the US, thinks this story is telling us how many parts are needed to make one good outcome. I want to hear from you what you wanted to tell from your story above.

 

I wanted to tell “If at first, you don’t succeed, try try again” too.

4. This is our last stroy written by Tomie DePaola. Now that you read 12 books do you feel you know the writer very well? Pick your favorite story and tell why you like the story. Let’s see which one will be ranked as the most favorite Tomie Story by Suksuk Children. This is going to be fun!!

 

I think I like the story “Now One Foot, Now One Other”

Because that story moved my heart.

주울 2010-10-11 01:04:28
그레이스 유일하게 She 가 아니고 I 가 작품속에 주인공이 되서 글을 썼구나 ..
그러면 Fred 가 극중 " 나" 가 되는거지?
독특한 시도다 이왕 등장인물에 이름을 다 부여했으니 글을쓸때 그 이름들을 다 드러내면 더 좋을거같다....
그레이스도 왼발 오른발을 더 좋아하는구나....감동적인 이야기들을 좋아하는구나...이책이 최다 득표네...
소피맘 2010-10-11 09:13:19
오른발 왼발.. 생각보다 많은 아이들이 감동적인 이야기를 좋아 하네요. 전 생각도 못했는데요.
홍박샘 2010-10-11 10:24:42
Now One Foot, Now One Other has scored 3.
Jennyapple 2010-10-10 23:55 

 

Jennyapple 2010-10-10 23:58:22
여지껏 놀다가 휴 가까스로 미션했어요..
소피맘 2010-10-11 09:18:23
역시.. 재밌게 잘 읽었어요. ^^
톡톡 튀는 제니애플의 쿠킹쇼가 생각나요.
홍박샘 2010-10-11 10:24:06
The Clown of God has scored 1.
Annie 2010-10-10 20:45 

소피맘 2010-10-10 22:00:37
이야기를 아기자기 재밌게 잘 꾸몄어요. 읽는 재미가 나네요.ㅎㅎ
주울 2010-10-11 00:33:26
하하 매우 생동감 있는 글이어요. 마치 애니가 조잘조잘하는거 같습니다
매우 자세하고 명랑한 글을 보고 있노라면 애니는 참 글쓰는것을 좋아 하는거 같아요.. 좋아하는것만큼 좋은 방법이 없거든요..
애니 홧팅
홍박샘 2010-10-11 10:23:28
Now one food now the other has scored 2.
It's tie with The Knight & the Dragon.
Hwi yoon 2010-10-10 20:00 

Hwi yoon맘 2010-10-10 21:52:52
위의 애니와 아래 소피의 정성스런 미션을 보니 쫌 미안스럽네요,,
좀 더 분발하겠어요^**^
소피맘 2010-10-10 22:03:58
휘윤이는 드래곤 이야기가 제일 재밌었군요. 역시 재미난 그림으로 정성껏 마무리하고요. ^^
곧 시험이라 바쁘지요? 우리는 그 다음 주라 이렇게 여유를 부리고 있네요. ㅎㅎㅎ
주울 2010-10-11 00:36:38
희윤이 그림까지..ㅎㅎ
드레곤표 바베큐에 환호하는 관중들이지요?
그림이 곧 이미지고 이것이 곧 상상력이니까 지금 휘윤이는 드레곤책을 읽고 상상의 나랴를 펼쳤군요 ...제대로 읽은겁니다
휘윤이 홧팅..
홍박샘 2010-10-11 10:22:40
The Knight & the Dragon has scored 2.
Sophie 2010-10-10 10:32 

- Purpose: Making My Own Story

- theme: Being patient / Keep trying

 

I. You are going to be a writer now. Look at the pictures of Pancakes for Breakfast. How many characters do you need to make a good story using the pictures? Decide the number of characters and give a name of your own to each character.

I’ll need 4 people. Ms. Cook, Jonny(dog), Jinny(cat),and the storekeeper.

 

2. Write the events in order using the words given if necessary. You can use any words you want to use to make the story fun.

 

   the recipe book, flour, eggs, milk, butter, syrup, the chicken pen, shopkeeper,                

   ran out of, asked for, imagined, on her way back home, found, messy, smelled, her neighbor  

 

1

One morning Ms. Cook woke up and decided to have pancakes for her breakfast.

2

Ms. Cook pulled out the recipe book, and set out the ingredients.

3

She put the bowl and a flour on the table. She reached for the egg, but there was no egg!

4

She went to the chicken pen and picked up some eggs.

5

When she came back, someone had poured the flour in to the bowl! She thought ‘that’s very strange! Who could have done this?’

6

She had to make some butter. So, she reached for a milk. But there was no milk, too!

7

She went to the cowhouse, sqeezed some milk from the cow, and went back home. When she reached the home, someone had put the egg into the flour! Mr. Cook was very confused.

8

She made the butter, and she reached for salt and suger. But only salt was there.

9

She went to the shop and bought some suger.

10

She opened her door, and she couldn’t belive her eyes. Someone put the butter into the batter and made a one pancake! And she was getting a little suspicious.

11

The maple syrup was gone too, so she went to the store again, and bought it. She headed toward her house, and she was knocked down by surprise. Again, someone had used half of the batter making pancakes. Now, she was very suspicious. She gave Jonny and Jinny an eye.

12

She wanted the truth, so she pretended that she was going somewhere, and very silently, she turned back toward home. She peeked into the door. And there, Jonny and Jinny was MAKING PANCAKES! Ms. Cook crashed to the room and hugged Jonny and Jinny happily.

13

She ate the pancake happily with Jonny and Jinny.

 

3. What is the purpose of your story? I want to make a story saying that “If at first you don’t succeed, try again.” One of my friends, who is an English teacher in the US, thinks this story is telling us how many parts are needed to make one good outcome. I want to hear from you what you wanted to tell from your story above.

I want to tell ‘Make impossible things possible’. A dog and a cat cooking seems pretty an impossible thing.

 

4. This is our last story written by Tomie DePaola. Now that you read 12 books do you feel you know the writer very well? Pick your favorite story and tell why you like the story. Let’s see which one will be ranked as the most favorite Tomie Story by Suksuk Children. This is going to be fun!!

 

I like the story ‘The popcorn book’. Because I like popcorn and this book is about popcorn. Also, the drawing of the book is very pretty. And popcorn is like a cloud. Also, I think it's best to eat the popcorn when I'm in the movie theater.

 

 

주울 2010-10-11 00:41:16
소피 ..
결말을 바꿔서 하나의 익살스런 추리극? 으로 바꿔놨군요... 기발합니다
좋아하는 이야기책으로 팝곤북을 골랐네요 영화관에서 팝콘먹는것을 이야기하니 갑자기 아줌마도 팝곤이 땡기내요..^^이밤중에..
마침 낼 영화초대를 받아서 제니랑 같이 가는데 거그서 꼭 팝콘 한사발 해야겠네요 ^^
홍박샘 2010-10-11 10:22:01
The Popcorn book.
Tada~
Edward 2010-10-10 09:52 

- Purpose: Making My Own Story

- theme: Being patient / Keep trying

 

I. You are going to be a writer now. Look at the pictures of Pancakes for Breakfast. How many characters do you need to make a good story using the pictures? Decide the number of characters and give a name of your own to each character.

The old grandma named ‘Grany.’

The dog named ‘pancake.’

The cat named ‘milk.’

The farmer named ’Franky’

 The wife named ‘Ms. Franky.

2. Write the events in order using the words given if necessary. You can use any words you want to use to make the story fun.

 

   the recipe book, flour, eggs, milk, butter, syrup, the chicken pen, shopkeeper,                 

   ran out of, asked for, imagined, on her way back home, found, messy, smelled, her neighbor  

 

1

One morning Grany woke up and decided to have pancakes for her breakfast.

2

She wants to make a pancake to eat in breakfast.

3

She went to the kitchen to bake pancake

4

She opens the pancake recipe.

5

She pour the flour to the boul.

6

She has no eggs so she went to the henhouse.

7

When she came and pour eggs, there was no milk.

8

She went to the barn and squeeze some milk from a cow.

9

She pour milk and when she need maple syrup, there were no maple syrup in the boul.

10

When she came with one bottle of maple syrup, the dog and a cat all ate them.

11

She thought she would never taste that pancake again.

12

Then she could smell some pancakes from the neighborhood.

13

She ran quickly as she can to her neighborhood and ate some pancake with-out asking.                                

 

3. What is the purpose of your story? I want to make a story saying that “If at first you don’t succeed, try again.” One of my friends, who is an English teacher in the US, thinks this story is telling us how many parts are needed to make one good outcome. I want to hear from you what you wanted to tell from your story above.

“do not forgot your neighbor is around you and would help you when you are in trouble. Don’t

lose your hope when you’re in trouble.”

 

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4. This is our last stroy written by Tomie DePaola. Now that you read 12 books do you feel you know the writer very well? Pick your favorite story and tell why you like the story. Let’s see which one will be ranked as the most favorite Tomie Story by Suksuk Children. This is going to be fun!!

I love the The night and the dragon. book.

Because I like the part the dragon and knight meet and fight each other and the librarian thought it will be great when knight and a dragon will make a hot dog shop.

Sophie맘 2010-10-10 14:20:38
음... 역시 남자아이라 드래곤이 당첨됐군요.ㅎㅎ
주울 2010-10-11 00:45:45
에드워드 안녕..
할머니랑 고양이와 강아지 이름을 참 인상적으로 지었다
이왕 이름을 지었다면 글을쓸때 그예쁜 이름을 드러냈다면 글이 더 흥미로왔을거야..
she 나 the dog 또 the cat 대신에 그 이름을 쓰면 이름하나 바ㅜ껐을뿐인데도 글이 훨씬 구체적으로 느껴질거같구나..^^
홍박샘 2010-10-11 10:21:05
The night and the dragon.
Bingo!
Sue 2010-10-08 12:02 

먼저.. 흠... 댓글 주욱 올려진거 보고, 넘 웃겨서 킥킥대며 한참을 웃었에요..

다들 멋진 유머감각의 소유자들이시네요..

 

주말에 바쁜일들이 주욱 연결되어서 미션을 빨리하라 했어요..

호수공원축제, 봉사활동, 글구 아나바다서 애들 작은 옷들도 좀 내놓고 팔아보려구요..

시간에 쫓기다보니 본의?아니게 또 일빠가 되버리네요..쑥쓰~~~~ㅠㅠ

 

 

답안지가 없어서 채점해볼수도 없고 .. 알아서 잘 썼겠지 싶어 걍 올립니다..

이러다보니 다른친구들 댓글도 자신이 없어서리.. 게으름만 피우고 있슴돠...

휘윤맘 2010-10-08 16:42:58
물 흐르둣이 자연스러운 문장들~~
sue의 글을 보면 정말 뭘 알고 쓰는구나 라는 느낌?
완전 야무딱진 모범생,,맞쥬???
홍박샘 2010-10-09 22:15:33
"Now One Foot Now the Other" has scored 1.
Sophie맘 2010-10-10 14:19:38
마음이 따뜻해지는 이야기를 좋아하는군요.
주울 2010-10-11 00:53:58
호호 수도 이왕 이름을 지었다면 글속에 그 예쁜 이름을 드러낸다면 훨씬 글이 구체적으로 읽는사람한테 다가올거같다...
실패는 성공의 어머니지 맞는 말이야
수는 왼발 오른발 이책이 좋구나 감동스럽고 아름다운이야기 ..요즘엔 의외로 모든아이들이 책에서 감동을 느끼지는 않는거같더라...
수홧팅
Annie맘 2010-10-07 01:18 

벌써 마지막 책이군요.

 

모기한마리 잡다가 잠이 홀라당 깨버려 오랜만에 쑥쑥에 들어와봐요.

유별난 둘째가 있어 밤 10시만 되면 파김치가 되서 골아 떨어집니다.

그래서 열심히 리플달아주시는 분들께 너무나 죄송스럽네요. 또한 감사드리구요.

 

그래도 뭐니뭐니해도 미션 열심히 내주신 홍박샘님께 큰 감사드립니다.   

수다맘 2010-10-06 09:02 

이름만으로 유머를 자아낼 수 있는 재주 ^^

역시 홍박샘님 이십니다.

 

토미드 파올라 마지막 책이군요. 감사합니다.

휘윤 2010-10-05 14:59 

박사님 미션감사합니당..

호박샘 2010-10-05 15:32:22
ㄴ 지워서 호박샘 만들까?
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