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[12]GS #1 Emerald Eye

±Û¾´ÀÌ WFS JaeWon

µî·ÏÀÏ 2012-06-06 05:13

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Hello, everyone!
It is nice to be back after a two month break!
I was busy throughout 11th grade and I'm very happy that it's finally over.
I only have one more year, and then I'm off to college. YAY!

It's 5 in the morning and I'm alive and active. I guess getting adjusted to Korean time is difficult since I've been back for only 3 days.
For those of you who have heard about my shoulder injury, you don't have to worry. I'm fine and my shoulder is too. Thank you everyone who has worried about me.
 
Before I forget, I want to thank Sophie since she will post her own questions for all you guys.
I hope you all appreciate it and thank her for this.

This is a new series and I think it's a very interesting book.
I love it when we start something new.
It's not too difficult and I really hope you enjoy it!

For you soccer fans, I'm going to be excited about Euro 2012. I think you guys should too.
Enjoy!!

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Çý´Ï¸¾ 2012-06-17 16:58 

5Çгâ Çý´ÏÀÔ´Ï´Ù~

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Àç¿ø»ù, ¼ÒÇǾð´Ï °¨»çµå·Á¿ä~

 

sophie 2012-06-18 21:51:24
Çý´Ï ¹Ý°¡¿ö¿ä. ¾È ¿À½Ã³ª »ì¦ °ÆÁ¤Çß´ä´Ï´Ù. ^^
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Çý´Ï¸¾ 2012-06-18 23:16:46
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´õ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÇÒ²²¿ä.^^
Grace¸¾ 2012-06-12 01:12 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:32:33
Quality work! I see that you put in much effort here!
I notice you always do well, and I hope you keep it up!
Keep it up!
P.s. it's "Don't be absent" not "don't absence." Absence is a noun not a verb!
sophie 2012-06-12 11:29:02
±×·¹À̽º ¾È³ç!
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ÁÖ¿ï 2012-06-13 12:41:20
¾ÆÀ¯ ¿À·£¸¸À̾î¿ä ±×·¹À̽º.^^.
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½º¸¶ÀÏ°É 2012-06-11 23:30 

Á» ´Ê¾ú³×¿ä.. ´ãºÎÅÏ »¡¸® Çؼ­ ¿Ã¸±°Ô¿ä..

Grace¸¾ 2012-06-12 01:15:47
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:30:46
½º¸¶ÀÏ°É, you make me smile.
I see that you worked hard and I salute you.
This is what I would call quality work! Great job.
Keep up that great work!
sophie 2012-06-12 11:37:15
Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð¿Í ÇÔ²² ´Ù½Ã ¸¸³µ³×¿ä. ¹Ý°¡¿ö¿ä.^^
¹ú½á ¼ö¿µÀå¿¡ ´Ù³à¿Ã ±âȸ°¡ ÀÖ¾ú±º¿ä? ¹°ÀÌ Â÷°©Áö ¾Ê¾Æ ³î±â¿¡ ÁÁ¾Ò³ªºÁ¿ä.
°è¼Ó Áñ°Ì°Ô Ã¥Àаí ÇÔ²² ÇØ¿ä. ÀßÇÏ°í ÀÖ¾î¿ä.^^
ÁÖ¿ï 2012-06-13 12:50:33
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Çô´ÏÈĴϸ¾ 2012-06-11 23:06 

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Àç¿ø»ù, ¼ÒÇÇ´©³ª ¸ðµÎ °í¸¶¿ö¿ä!!!

Grace¸¾ 2012-06-12 01:20:08
°¡Á·°úÀÇ ³ªµéÀÌ°¡ Áñ°Å¿üÀ½ÀÌ ´À²¸Áö³×¿ä... ¹¹~ ¶¡ÀÌ °­¹°Ã³·³ È带¸¸Å­ Èûµé¾úÀ½µµ ´À²¼¾î¿ä.^^
Âü ÀßÇß¾î¿ä.
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:29:25
Good job! But, as I continue to say this, I think you can do better and make your work longer.
You did well but I feel like there's room for improvement.
Keep it up!
Åè¼Ò¿© 2012-06-12 10:35:59
ÀúµÎ °°Àº 3Çг⠸ӽø¶¶ó ´õ ¹Ý°©½À´Ï´Ù.
¿¬ÇÊÀ» ÁøÇÑ½É ¿¬ÇÊ·Î ¹Ù²ãº¸¼¼¿ä. ¾Æ¹«¸® ÈûÀ»Á൵ ¿¬ÇѽÉÀº °è¼Ó ¿¬Çϰŵç¿ä.
ÀúÈñ ¾ÆÀ̵µ ¼Õ¿¡ ÈûÀÌ ¾ø¾î¼­ ²À "ÁøÇѽÉ' ¿¬ÇÊ·Î »çÁØ´ä´Ï´Ù. ^ ^
sophie 2012-06-12 11:44:49
¿À~ ±Í¿©¿î ¸·³»µé.. ¹Ý°¡¿ö¿ä. ^^
ºê¶óÀ̾𵵠Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏÁÒ? Àç¹Õ´Â Ã¥À¸·Î ½ÃÀÛÇÏ°Ô µÇ¾î ±Ý¹æ ÀûÀÀÇÒ°Å¿¹¿ä.
Èûµç µî»êµµ ¸À³­ Á¡½ÉÀ¸·Î ´ÞÄÞÇÑ ÀÏ·Î ¶Òµü ¹Ù²ï °Í °°³×¿ä.^^ Àç¹Õ°Ô ÀßÀоú¾î¿ä.
È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:39:07
Brian, this is your first work, right? Great job!
I hope you'll keep learning while enjoyng good books.
anthropo 2012-06-11 22:13 

6Çгâ Ŭ·¹¾îÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

»õ·Î ¿Â Ä£±¸/µ¿»ýµé ¹Ý°¡¿ö¿ä~!´Ù ³Ñ ÀßÇؼ­ ºÎ´ã°¨ÀÌ...!

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And JaeWon Oppa, it's very nice to have you back!~

 

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Çô´ÏÈĴϸ¾ 2012-06-11 23:12:10
Ŭ·¹¾î¾ç À̸𰡠´À¹Ç´À¹Ç ³î¶ú¾î. ¿Ö³ÄÇϸé, ³Ê¹«³Ê¹« Àß ½á¼­...
¿ì¸® Brianµµ 3³â ÈÄ¿£ ±× Á¤µµÀÇ ÇÊ·ÂÀ» ¹ßÈÖÇØ ÁÙ±î?
Á¦¹ß ±×·± ³¯ÀÌ ¿À±â¸¦ ºô¸ç Good night~
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:27:30
Quality! Superb! I see you worked hard on this assignment.
I salute you and I hope that you continue to work this hard and well.
Keep up the great work!
sophie 2012-06-12 11:54:29
Ŭ·¹¾î°¡ ½ÃÇèÀå¼Ò¸¦ ã´À¶ó °í»ýÀ» Çß±º¿ä. Èûµé¾ú°ÚÁö¸¸ ½Ã°£ ¿©À¯°¡ ÀÖ¾î ´ÙÇàÀ̾ú³×¿ä.
¿­½ÉÈ÷ °øºÎÇßÀ¸´Ï °á°ú¾ß ´ç¿¬ ÁÁÀ»°Å±¸¿ä. ^^ ¸¶À½¿¡ µé Á¤µµÀÇ ¼ºÀûÀÌ ³ª¿Ã°Å¶ó »ý°¢µÇ¾î¿ä.
¿¡¸Þ¶öµå¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ½Ãµµ Àç¹Õ°Ô Àоú¾î¿ä. Àý´ë ¹° ±Ùó¿¡µµ °¡Áö ¸»¾Æ¾ß°Ú¾î¿ä. ¤¾¤¾ ÀßÇß½À´Ï´Ù.

Ŭ·¹¾î ¾î¸Ó´Ï²²¼­ ¸¹ÀÌ Èûµå½Ã°Ú¾î¿ä. Àá½Ã¶óµµ ÇѼû µ¹¸± ¿©À¯°¡ Àֱ⸦ ¹Ù¶ø´Ï´Ù.
À¯¼®¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-12 15:09:29
Ŭ·¹¾î ¹Ý°¡¿Í¿ä ºÏ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» Á¤¸» ÀÚ±âÁÖµµÀûÀ¸·Î ÇÏ³×¿ä ½º½º·Î ÇÏ´Â°Ç ±âº»ÀÌ°í ÄÄ¿¡ ¿Ã¸®°í Àλç±îÁö,
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Âü ÀßÇß¾î¿ä ¦¦
Åè¼Ò¿© 2012-06-11 22:13 

 

ÃÊ3/³²/joon

 

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Çô´ÏÈĴϸ¾ 2012-06-11 23:15:27
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:24:03
Good job, not bad. But, I emphasize this to others and I'll say this to you, make sure your work is neater and longer. I definitely think there's room for improvement here.
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-06-12 12:42:03
ÁØÀÌ°¡ 3ÇгâÀ̳׿ä. ÈûÀÖ°Ô ¾´ ±Û¾¾°¡ ³Ñ~ ±Í¿±½À´Ï´Ù. ^^
ÇÒ¸Ó´Ï´ì¿¡ ´Ù³à¿Ô±º¿ä. ±×·±µ¥ °Å±â¼­ ¾çÆĸ¦ Á÷Á¢ ¸¸Áú ÀÏÀÌ ÀÖ¾ú¾î¿ä? ºñ´©·Î ±ú²ýÀÌ ¾Ä¾ú´Ù´Â À̾߱Ⱑ ¹«Ã´ Àç¹Õ³×¿ä. ÀßÇß½À´Ï´Ù.^^
È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:42:20
Hello! You're new here.
Great job. Hope you didn't feel much stressed with wrting long answers.
¹«Àεî´ë21 2012-06-11 21:52 

WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:22:47
First! Great job! I can tell that you've been working hard and I greatly appreciate that.
If your work can be slightly longer, all would be superb.
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-06-12 12:51:06
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´Ù½ÃõõÈ÷ 2012-06-11 20:55 

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¹«Àεî´ë21 2012-06-11 21:58:57
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:21:26
Wow! Good work. I see you've put in much effort to my assignment.
I appreciate that and I'm glad to see you working hard.
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-06-12 12:57:56
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sophie 2012-06-11 20:01:07
ÇÏÀ̵ð Á¤¸» ¹Ý°¡¿ö¿ä.^^ ÀÌÁ¦ Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð¿Í ÇÔ²² ²ÙÁØÈ÷ ¸¸³ª´Â°Å³×¿ä!
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´Ù½ÃõõÈ÷ 2012-06-11 21:06:05
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:20:22
'Thinked' is 'thought' Heidi. Good work but your work is a little too short.
I'm not trying to be demanding but I wish that you put in some more effort.
Good work but just do better. Keep it up!
¹ÎÀ±»ç¶û 2012-06-11 13:31 

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¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-11 15:52:42
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Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-11 19:48:11
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sophie 2012-06-11 20:16:04
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´Ù½ÃõõÈ÷ 2012-06-11 21:09:50
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:19:02
Good work! I see you've put in much effort here.
If your work can be a little neater and longer, I'll give you a real thumbs up!
Good job and always keep it up!
¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-11 12:29 

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¹ÎÀ±»ç¶û 2012-06-11 13:34:25
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ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-06-11 14:40:32
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±¸±¸½º 2012-06-11 16:16:06
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Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-11 19:52:58
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sophie 2012-06-11 20:34:28
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´Ù½ÃõõÈ÷ 2012-06-11 21:13:47
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¾ÆÀ̸° ~ Á¤¸» ÀßÇß¾î¿ä!!!
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:15:31
Hey there! Your mother says that you worked hard on this assignment.
Good job. You did pretty well. I do want your work to be longer and have more quality.
Don't get me wrong, you did well but just keep it up!
È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:46:36
Hello, new friend!
Wow, I can't believe it's your first work with us.
Great job! I can see your confidence in using Engish.
Keep up the good work!
»ø¸®321 2012-06-11 12:24 

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¹ÎÀ±»ç¶û 2012-06-11 13:36:28
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Àúµµ °¡²û ¿­µµ ¹Þ°í Çߴµ¥ ÀÏ´Ü ³¡±îÁö °¡´Âµ¥ ÀÇÀǸ¦ µÎ·Á±¸¿ä.
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¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-11 15:58:20
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Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-11 19:58:01
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sophie 2012-06-11 20:38:53
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:10:31
Yes, you've improved. I say this to others, but I definitely believe you can do better.
Your work is not as long as that of others, and if you can make your work longer, all would be great.
Keep it up!
È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:52:37
Good to have you here in the Bookclub 12.
How was your work? Was it too difficult or was it jus Okay?
Hope you enjoy reading the book, first.
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-06-10 23:04 

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º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-11 11:17:18
ÈÖÀ±¸¾´Ô~±×¸®°í ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ ¹Ý°©½À´Ï´Ù. ÈÖÀ±ÀÌÀÇ ±Û¿¡¼­ Áñ°Å¿òÀÌ ¹¯¾î³ª³×¿ä.
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¹ÎÀ±»ç¶û 2012-06-11 13:39:03
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¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-11 16:01:18
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Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-11 20:01:58
Á¤¸» ¹°Ç³¼± ³îÀ̸¦ Çϱ⿡ ÁÁÀº ³¯¾¾ÀÎ°Í °°³×¿ä. ÀºÀ̶û À̹ø ÁÖ¸»¿¡ ¹Édz¼±³îÀÌ ÇÏÀÚ°í ÇØ¾ß ÇÒ°Í °°¾Æ¿ä. ÁÁÀº ¾ÆÀ̵ð¾î¸¦ ÁØ ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ¿¡°Ô °¨»ç¸¦ ÀüÇÕ´Ï´Ù.
sophie 2012-06-11 20:44:32
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:07:46
Hey ÈÖÀ±, it's been a while. I see you continue to work hard.
I say this to others, but I wish your work can be slightly longer.
Don't forget, your work is very good; it has quality! Keep it up!
À¯¼®¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-10 22:54 

6Çгâ Á¤À¯¼®ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð·Î 12±â ºÏŬ·´À» óÀ½ È°µ¿À» ÇϰԵǾú¾î¿ä.

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º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-11 11:11:05
À¯¼®À̸¦ ¿ä±â¼­ ¶Ç ¸¸³ª°Ô µÇ¾î ´õ¿í ¹Ý°©³×¿ä.
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¹ÎÀ±»ç¶û 2012-06-11 13:38:11
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Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-11 20:04:13
Á¤¸» ±×¸²À» Àß ±×¸®³×¿ä ÀºÀÌ´Â ¾î·Á¼­ÀÎÁö ±×¸²±×¸®´Â Àç¹Ì¿¡ ºÏŬ·´ÇÏ´Â°Í °°¾Æ¿ä.¤¾¤¾ À¯¼®ÀÌ ¹Ý°©°í ´ãÁÖ¿¡ ¸¸³ª¿ä
sophie 2012-06-11 20:49:38
À¯¼®ÀÌ°¡ ±Ûµµ Àß¾²Áö¸¸ ±×¸² ¼Ø¾¾µµ º¸ÅëÀÌ ¾Æ´Ï³×¿ä.^^
Áñ°Ì°Ô ÇÏ°í ÀÖ´Ù´Ï ´õ ¹Ý°©±¸¿ä, ÁÖ¸»ÀÌ ³Ê¹« ºü¸£°Ô È×~ Áö³ª°£´Ù´Â ¾Æ½¬¿òÀº ÀúÈñÁý ±× ´©±º°¡°¡ ´õ Àý°¨ÇÏ°í ÀÖ´ä´Ï´Ù. ¤¾¤¾ ¾ÆÁÖ ÀßÇÏ°í Àֳ׿ä!!
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:06:09
That is a great drawing! I think that's even better than the original!
Your work is good but I do wish it were longer.
Quality work! Keep it up!
È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:55:16
wow, it doesn't look like your first assignment.
I mean I thought you are one of our old members
because your work seems so good!
Glad to have you here!
windward 2012-06-10 22:25 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:03:56
Good work. If your answers could be slightly longer, all would be great.
I see your work has quality and I salute you.
Keep it up
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-12 10:00:53
And here is our boss! You always impress me and I appreciate your work!
Again, I don't have much to say because your work is always good.
Keep it up!!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-10 18:32:26
First! I'm first to leave a comment here! haha
Well, good job and I appreciate your work. However, I say to others but I wish you put more time into your work. Anyways, it's still very good!
Keep it up. YOLO
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-10 18:26:15
I like the lined paper and the font! It seems pretty artistic.
Good job but I would like it if your work was longer.
If your answers were a little longer, everything would be nicer!
Keep it up! YOLO
sophie 2012-06-10 20:06:42
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-10 18:24:38
Nice work! I see you've put in lots of time.
I would like it if you made your answers slightly longer. Don't get me wrong, your work is good.
Keep up that good work! YOLO
sophie 2012-06-10 20:13:42
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-10 18:18:01
FUN! FUN! I like fun too!
Your work is very neat and I sure do like that as well.
I see that you've put in much time and work into this week's assignment. I hope you continue to do that! By the way, mouse is mice in the plural, not mouses.
Keep up that great work! YOLO
sophie 2012-06-10 20:18:28
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È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:57:10
Wow I looked at your work again and again.
Great job! I can see you truly enjoyed this assignment.
Welcome!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-10 18:12:54
CSI, Mystery! I sure love mysteries as well! I like solving mysteries as well. I guess you and I are on the same page on that. Good and solid effort. Next time, I wish that your answers be a little longer. Keep up that hard work! YOLO
sophie 2012-06-10 20:23:40
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È«¹Ú»ù 2012-06-12 21:58:31
Welcome!
This is your first work and it's really good.
Keep up the good work!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-10 18:11:14
Solid effort. I see that your pages got a little wrinkled up. I'm going to assume that you worked so hard that the pages got wrinkled. If your answers were slightly longer, everything would be perfect. Good job though. Keep up the hard work! YOLO
sophie 2012-06-10 20:27:54
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Hello, Alvin!
Neat work! Was it kind of fun doing it?
Hope you enjoyed reading the book.
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Solid effort and good job. I appreciate what you've done, but I do wish that your answers were longer and more thoughtful such as the ones below. Overall, nice job, don't forget
Good job but I do wish it were better. YOLO
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