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[12]GS #2 - The Curse of the Cheese Pyramid

±Û¾´ÀÌ WFS JaeWon

µî·ÏÀÏ 2012-06-11 22:28

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http://www.suksuk.co.kr/momboard/CAX_090/3347

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Geronimo Stilton #2 - The Curse of the Cheese Pyramid.pdf (109.39KB)

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How is everyone doing?
Are you all preparing for final exams? Good luck.
I've been busy watching Euro 2012 soccer these past couple days.
It's fun getting up in the middle of the night to watch exciting soccer! I'm loving it.

These Geronimo Stilton books are long, but they are certainly interesting.
This story was good in that we get to learn some ancient history on Egypt.
I can bet that all of you guys will enjoy this book!

I say this to many people, but I really do wish everyone writes (or types) his or her answers longer.
I would really start praising you and appreciating it more if I see some good effort.
Remember, more is better than less.
But I am glad to see that some of you guys are improving with your English. I like that!

Good luck on preparation for exams and good luck reading and working on Geronimo Stilton!
Adios!

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literacy 2012-06-26 04:43 

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Veronica Grade4

sophie 2012-06-27 16:54:30
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sophie 2012-06-24 19:11:48
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sophie 2012-06-24 20:34:49
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sophie 2012-06-20 08:43:39
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anthropo 2012-06-20 11:18:11
Á¶±Ý ´Ê´õ¶óµµ ²ÙÁØÈ÷ ÇÏ°í ÀÖÀ¸´Ï, ±×°Í¸¸À¸·Îµµ ´ë´ÜÇÕ´Ï´Ù. ¹Ú¼ö !!!
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sophie 2012-06-20 08:51:30
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anthropo 2012-06-20 11:20:22
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Çý´Ï¸¾ 2012-06-18 22:58 

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sophie 2012-06-20 08:56:21
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anthropo 2012-06-20 11:24:13
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Çô´ÏÈĴϸ¾ 2012-06-18 22:47 

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sophie 2012-06-20 09:18:56
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anthropo 2012-06-20 11:28:09
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anthropo 2012-06-18 21:42 

6Çгâ Ŭ·¹¾îÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

 

sophie 2012-06-18 22:00:06
Ŭ·¹¾î°¡ ¸®µëüÁ¶¸¦ ¾ÆÁÖ ÁÁ¾ÆÇϳ׿ä.^^ ÈûµéÁö¸¸ ³¯·ÆÇÑ ¸öÀ» ¸¸µé±â ¾ÆÁÖ µü!!! ÀÌÁö¿ä.
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 22:26:55
Neat! Good! Superb! You deserve to hear those words from me!
This is really good and you really have impressed me.
I don't have much to say because this is so good!
I hope you continue to impress me with superbness! Keep it up!
Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-18 17:12 

¹Ì¼ÇÀ» ³Ê¹« ´Ê°Ô ¿Ã¸®³×¿ä. ÀºÀÌ°¡ ±×¸² ±×·Á¾ß ÇÑ´Ù°í Á» ±â´Ù·Á´Þ¶ó°í Çؼ­ °¡Áö°í ÀÖ¾ú´Âµ¥ ³ë´À¶ó°í Åë ±×¸² ±×¸± ½Ã°£À» ¸ø³»¾ú¾î¿ä. ±×·¡¼­ ¿À´Ã ±×³É ¿Ã·Á¾ß°Ú´Ù°í Çß´ä´Ï´Ù. ¤¾¤¾ ÀÌÁýÆ® ½ÅÀº ÀÌ»Ú°Ô »ý°å´Ù´Â ÀÌÀ¯¸¸À¸·Î Ã¥¿¡ ³ª¿ÀÁö ¾ÊÀº ½ÅÀ» °ñ¶ú½À´Ï´Ù. ÀÌ»Û °ÍÀ» ³Ê¹« ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â ÀºÀ̳׿ä. ¤»¤»

º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-18 18:23:28
ÀºÀÌÀÇ ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» º¸´Ï.Àúµµ ¸ð¸£°Ô ÀºÀÌ°¡ ±×¸° ¹Ì¼Ò°¡ Áö¾îÁö³×¿ä~^^ Ç÷íÀÌ Á¤¸» Àç¹ÌÀÖ³ª ºÁ¿ä.
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sophie 2012-06-18 22:06:13
Àº»ö Ç÷íÀÌ Á¤¸» ¿¹»ÚÁö¿ä. º¸°í ÀÖÀ¸¸é ÇÑ ¹ø¾¿ ºÒ¾îº¸°í ½ÍÀº »ý°¢ÀÌ µé°Ô ÇÏ´õ¶ó±¸¿ä. ^^
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 22:25:36
Hey Á¶Àº! Good job.
I see you've done better than before but I know that you can do better.
You've shown me quality work before and I hope you do it again.
I'm going to be expecting good as well as long work from you! Fighting!!!!
anthropo 2012-06-20 11:33:44
¾î¸° ÀºÀÌ°¡ ²ÙÁØÈ÷ ³Ñ³Ñ ÀßÇÏ°í Àֳ׿ä. ĪÂù ¸¹ÀÌ ÇØÁÖ¼¼¿ä ^^
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Grace¸¾ 2012-06-18 00:16 

±¸±¸½º 2012-06-18 11:11:31
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Á¶Àº¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-18 17:18:41
±×·¹À̽º´Â ¼îÇÎÀ» ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â ±º¿ä. ¾ö¸¶°¡ ³Ê¹« ÁÁ°Ú¾î¿ä. ÀºÀÌ´Â ¼îÇÎÀ» ¾ó¸¶³ª ½È¾îÇÏ´ÂÁö...Àú È¥ÀÚ ´Ù³à¿Í¾ß ÇÑ´ä´Ï´Ù. ¤¾¤¾ µþÀ̶û ¼îÇÎÇÏ´Â °Íµµ Å« Àç¹Îµ¥ ¸»¿¡¿ä.
sophie 2012-06-18 22:18:24
±×·¹À̽º°¡ ¾Æ±âÀÚ±âÇÑ °ÍÀ» ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â ¼Ò³à³×¿ä. ^^ ¿äÁò ´ëÇü ÆÒ½ÃÁ¡?ÀÌ ¸¹Àº °Í °°´õ¶ó±¸¿ä. ¿¹»Û °ÍµéÀÌ ¸¹¾Æ º¸±â¸¸ Çصµ Áñ°Ì°í,, ¤¾¤¾ ±×·¹À̽º ±Û ÀߺýÀ´Ï´Ù. ¼ö°íÇß¾î¿ä.^^
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 22:20:49
I didn't know that a Goddess looked that simple. Haha
I think it's cute that you completed your work on ruled note paper.
You did well and I really hope you continue to do well.
Fighting!!!
Grace¸¾ 2012-06-18 22:55:24
Grace:I am sorry that i didn't drew the goddess;;(I was working on it but it became a monkey not a goddess...)I forgot to erase the sketch..sorry~~
¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-06-17 20:39 

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So pretty! Wow! My eyes were just delighted by your drawings!
You as well as others followed my instructions superbly. Wow! Really, great job!
I hope you continue to impress me with such quality!
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Our leader, Sophie is never disappointing! I don't think I've ever said this to you, but you are the model for others in our bookclub. So far, you've been doing a superb job in being a good role model. I don't have much to say because this is splendid! Be that good leader!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 22:00:04
I love how you did exactly as you were told! You've shown great quality and I really do appreciate.
I'm very happy and I really hope you pursue in what you're doing for me!
Congrats! Keep it up!
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ÈÖÀ±, you did exactly as you were told! Great work!
You really never disappoint me, congratulations!
I really hope you continue to do well! Adios
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 21:54:59
I love Pokemon as well! My favorite character is Charizard!
I see you've done very well and I love it when relatively new members do superbly!
Keep it up!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 21:51:29
Good work! There's not much to say. You did really well.
I like how almost everyone including you has done so well.
I hope you keep working well and hard!!
±¸±¸½º 2012-06-16 16:44 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 21:37:13
Yes, more is better than less. And you chose to do the "more." Great job!
Your work is neat and well-organized. It was easy for me to keep up!
Superb effort and I hope you continue this awesome work!
ÃÊ·Ï»ç°ú 2012-06-16 16:37 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 21:35:32
Great! You did exactly what I had asked you to do! I congratulate you on your hard work!
I like the neatness and length wise, it's pretty good.
Keep it up!
º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-14 22:30 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-18 21:28:22
You are good! I love it when a relatively new member shows me really good quality work! I like it.
I love how it's neat plus the picture of the pharaoh is very cute.
I hope you impress me more!

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/07/14 2,020
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 GS #5 Four mice deep in the jungle

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WFS Alex.. 2012/07/09 5,743
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 Big News

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/07/01 2,123
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 Hey, I'm Alex!

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WFS Alex.. 2012/06/29 3,749
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 GS #4 + Grammar #3

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/25 5,367
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 GS #3 + Alex Park

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/19 6,638
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 Little Notice

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/18 2,306
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 GS #2 - The Curse of the Cheese Pyramid

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/11 4,987
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 GS #1 Emerald Eye

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/06 8,285
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È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/27 4,034
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 Andrew Lost #8 In the Garden

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È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/15 3,621
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 Andrew Lost #7 - In the Jungle

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È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/08 4,416
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 Andrew Lost #6 - Under Water

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È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/01 3,866
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 Andrew Lost 5 - In Time

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 Andrew Lost 4 - In the Deep

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/04/10 3,670
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 Andrew Lost - On the Reef

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È«¹Ú»ù 2012/04/02 4,033
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 Andrew Lost 2 - In the Whale

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/27 4,175
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 Andrew Lost - On the Dog

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/11 5,575
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 Step Into Reading 8 - The Trail of Tears

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/08 4,097
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 SIR 8 - To the Top

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 Step into Reading 7 - Trojan Horse

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 Step Into Reading 6 - T. Rex, Hunter or Scavenger

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/20 3,880
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 Step into Reading 5 - Moonwalk The First Trip to the Moon

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/13 3,668
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 Step Into Reading 4 - Basketball¡¯s Greatest Players

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/06 3,965