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[12]GS #3 + Alex Park

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µî·ÏÀÏ 2012-06-19 22:25

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http://www.suksuk.co.kr/momboard/CAX_090/3383

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Geronimo Stilton #3 - Cat and Mouse in a Haunted House.pdf (133.55KB)

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Here's your assignment for this week.
Sorry it's one day late, but I think you all will enjoy this story one more day, right?
I liked it because the book was full of ghosts and scary things!
I know you'll be in for a thriller.

I'll tell you the big news!
From now, you'll have another leader who will takes turns with me.
His name is Alex Park and he goes to my school. He is my ÈĹè.
He's a great guy and I can trust him because he is very nice and a diligent student.
He will join us very soon, most likely in about one or two weeks.
When he does come, I hope you treat him with a nice welcoming, so he can feel comfortable.
The reason he will join us is that I will be very busy soon due to college processes, 
so I probably will not be able to read and post questions every weekend.
Eventually, Alex will completely take over the role as leader this fall.
So, I hope you all will respect and be nice to him.

Ciao~~


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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:29:12
Good work, I'm impressed.
I see you've put in much effort and the effort has paid you off.
Good job and keep doing well so I can praise you more!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:27:06
ÀºÀÌ, Last week, I said I didn't really see much effort on your work.
I said that because I know you could do better.
I'm not trying to make you feel bad.
Still I know you can do better. Keep it up!
¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-25 10:28 

Irene / ÃÊ5

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sophie 2012-06-25 21:52:56
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:20:14
Good work. I see you've done better, Irene.
I know there's slightly more room for improvement. I know you can do it.
Keep it up!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:13:52
ÈÖÀ±, nice to see you again.
Good work but for some reason I feel there could be a just a bit more.
Don't get me wrong, you're a good student but I know you can really impressive.
Keep it up!
À¯¼®¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-26 21:51:23
ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ À̹ø¿¡ ¹Ì¼Ç ¿­½ÉÈ÷ Ç߳׿ä.. ÀúÈñµµ ÁÖ¸»¿¡ ÀÏÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¸é ÀÏ¿¡ ÁýÁßÀÌ ¾ÈµÇ´Âµ¥, ¼Õ´ÔÀÌ ¿ÔÀ»¶§ ÈÖÀ±ÀÌÀÇ µé¶á ¸¶À½ÀÌ »ó»óÀÌ °¡³×¿ä..
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ÀÌÁ¦ ±â¸»°í»çµµ ³¡³µÀ¸´Ï ´Ù½Ã Çѹø µµÀüÇØ º¼¶ø´Ï´Ù. 

 

sophie 2012-06-25 09:09:44
ÇÏÇÏ,, ^^ ÀçÄ¡¸¸Á¡ ºñÅ°ÀÇ ±×¸² Àç¹Õ¾î¿ä. âÀÇ·Â ¹éÁ¡ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ^^
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ºñÅ° ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇØÁ༭ ĪÂù ¸¹ÀÌÇÕ´Ï´Ù.^^
º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-25 09:23:19
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¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-25 10:39:35
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:12:51
Wow! Good work, impressive.
I really appreciate your effort and I hope you continue to do this well.
Keep up the hard work!
À¯¼®¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-26 21:54:17
ºñÅ°ÀÇ º¸³Ê½º ¹Ì¼Ç ³Ê¹« ÈǸ¢ÇØ¿ä.. °°Àº ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» ´Ù¾çÇÏ°Ô º¯ÇüÇÏ´Â ´É·ÂÀÌ Å¹¿ùÇϳ׿ä.. ÁٰŸ® ¹Ì¼Çµµ Àб⠽±°Ô ¶Ç¹Ú¶Ç¹Ú, Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð¿Í ÁÖÀΰøµéÀÇ »ý°¢À» ´ã¾Æ¼­ Âü Àß ½è¾î¿ä.
Jenn 2012-06-24 22:30 

ÃÊ4/³²/Eugene

 

¿À·§¸¸¿¡ ¹Ì¼Ç ¿Ã¸³´Ï´Ù.

1³â °¡±îÀÌ ºÏŬ·´ ÀßÇØ¿À°í ÀÖ¾ú´Âµ¥ 4ÇгâÀÌ µÇ´Ï ¹¹°¡±×¸® ¹Ù»ÛÁö ¼÷Á¦ÇÒ ½Ã°£ÀÌ ¾ø°í ±×³É Àú³É ½Ã°£¸¸ Èê·Áº¸³»°í ÀÖ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. Çб³ °øºÎ¸¦ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ Çϴ°͵µ ¾Æ´Ï°í, ±×·¸´Ù°í ÇпøÀ» ´Ù´Ï´Â °Íµµ ¾Æ´Ï°í....

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¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-06-24 23:34:52
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À̹ø ¹Ì¼Ç ¿­½ÉÈ÷ Àß Çß¾î¿ä^^
sophie 2012-06-25 08:59:42
À¯ÁøÀÌ ¿À·¡°£¸¸¿¡ ´Ù½Ã º¸´Ï ´õ ¹Ý°©³×¿ä.^^ ¾î´ÀÁ¤µµ ½Ã°£ÀÌ Áö³ª¸é ¾à°£ ´À½¼ÇØÁö±â ¸¶·ÃÀÎ °Í °°¾Æ¿ä. 4ÇгâÂë µÇ¸é ´Ù¸¥ °ü½É°Å¸®µµ ¸¹¾ÆÁú ¶§ÀÎ°Í °°±âµµ ÇÏ°í,, Âü,,, ¾î´À °Í Çϳª ½¬¿î°Ô ¾ø½À´Ï´Ù.
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¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-25 10:43:01
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:10:21
Hey Eugene, it's good to see you again, but where's the effort bud?
Your work isn't as good as it used to be.
Compared to the work of others, you haven't really done much.
I know you can do better and I'll be expecting it.
Longer it is, the better. Keep it up!
À¯¼®¾ö¸¶ 2012-06-24 21:11 

ÃÊ 6Çгâ Á¤À¯¼®ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð ´ÙÀ½ ¹Ì¼ÇÀº ¾ðÁ¦ ³ª¿À³Ä°í ¹¯´Â °Ô Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð¿¡ Æø ºüÁø µí ÇØ¿ä..

 

¹®¹ý ¹®Á¦´Â Á¦°¡ ÀÔÀÌ ±ÙÁú±ÙÁúÇß´ä´Ï´Ù. °¡Á¤¹ý¿¡ ´ëÇØ ¾ÆÁ÷ Àß ¸ð¸£³×¿ä..

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Jenn 2012-06-24 22:34:14
¿Í¿ì, ±×¸²¼Ø¾¾°¡ ´ë´ÜÇϳ׿ä. ³»¿ëµµ ¾ÆÁÖ Ãæ½ÇÇÏ°Ô ÀßÇß½À´Ï´Ù.
ÀϺ»¾îµµ ÇÒ ÁÙ ¾Æ³ªºÁ¿ä. ´ÙÀç´Ù´ÉÇÑ Çü¾Æ³×¿ä.^^
¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-06-24 23:36:47
¤¾¤¾ ¿ì¸® 1Çг⠿츮 µÑ°°¡ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â Æ÷Äϸó.
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sophie 2012-06-25 08:54:42
À¯¼®ÀÌ°¡ 10°¡Áö³ª µÇ´Â ¹æ¾îÀåÄ¡¸¦ »ý°¢Çس»´À¶ó ¼ö°íÇ߳׿ä. ¿­½ÉÈ÷ »ý°¢ÇØÁ༭ °í¸¿½À´Ï´Ù.^^
Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð°¡ ±×·¸°Ô³ª Àç¹Õ±º¿ä? Áñ±â¸é¼­ ÇÑ´Ù´Ï ¿ª½Ã³ª ±Ûµµ ÁÄÁÄ ¾²³×¿ä.
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º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-25 09:30:15
À¯¼®ÀÌ°¡ Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð¿¡ Ç« ºüÁø ¸ð½ÀÀÌ ±Û°ú ±×¸² °÷°÷¿¡¼­ ¿³º¸À̳׿ä.
¹Ì¼Ç Á¤¸» ÈǸ¢ÇÏ°Ô Ç߳׿ä~Áö³­ ¹ø¿¡µµ ´À²¼Áö¸¸ ±×¸² ½Ç·ÂÀÌ ÃâÁßÇÕ´Ï´Ù.
Àç¿ø½ÜÀÌ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ°Ú¾î¿ä.
¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-25 10:50:26
¿ÀÈ£~~ ¾îÂÀ À̸®µµ Æ÷ÄϸóÀ» Àß ±×¸°µ¥¿ä~~ ^^
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:08:41
I love that Charizard! I really appreciate that you drew that beautiful pokemon for me!
Not only your drawing but your writing is also very good. You have impressed me much.
Continue to impress me more!
ÇÏÀ̵𸾠2012-06-24 20:18 

ÃÊ 5 ÇÏÀ̵ðÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

ÀÚ°í ÀϾ´õ´Ï ¸Ó¸®°¡ ±úÁúµíÀÌ ¾ÆÇÁ´Ù ±×·¯°í

¿Â ¸öÀÌ ¾¥½Ã°í ¾ÆÇÁ´Ù ±×·¯±æ·¡

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ÇÒ ÀÏ ´Ù ½ÃÄ×´õ´Ï....

 

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Áö±ÝÀº Àú³á ¸Ô°í Ã¥ ÀÐÀ¸¸é¼­ ½¬°í ÀÖ¾î¿ä.

¹ã»õ Àß ÀÚ°í ÀϾÀ¸¸é ÁÁ°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

 

¿À·£¸¸¿¡ ÇÏÀ̵ð³× Áý À̾߱⿴½À´Ï´Ù.

 

 

 

 

ÇÏÀ̵ð¯ 2012-06-24 20:49:07
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sophie 2012-06-24 20:51:14
ÇÏÀ̵𰡠°¨±â¿¡ °É¸°°Ç°¡¿ä? ¿­ÀÌ ÆÞÆÞ ³ª´Â°É ¾óÀ½¼ö°ÇÀ¸·Î ½ÄÇô°¡¸ç ¹Ì¼ÇÇѰų׿ä. ¾ÆÇ Áß¿¡µµ ºÏŬ·´ ±Û ¿Ü¿¡ ´Ù¸¥ Àϵ鵵 ´ÙÇß´Ù´Ï ³Ñ~ ´ë°ßÇÕ´Ï´Ù.
ÇÏÀ̵ðÀÇ ±ÛÀ» º¸´Ï ³ªÈ¦·Î Áý¿¡,, ¿µÈ­°¡ »ý°¢³ª¿ä. ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇß¾î¿ä. °¨±âµµ »¡¸® ¹°¸®Ä¡±æ ¹Ù·¡¿ä.
Jenn 2012-06-24 22:36:31
¾ÆÇ Áß¿¡µµ ÀÌ·¸°Ô ÈǸ¢ÇÏ°Ô ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» ¼öÇàÇÑ ÇÏÀÌµð¿¡°Ô ¹Ú¼ö¸¦ º¸³À´Ï´Ù.
»¡¸® ³´±æ ±âµµÇÒ²²¿ä.
¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-06-24 23:39:28
¾î, ºñÅ° ÇÑ´Þ Àü ¾ÆÆÍ´ø Áõ¼¼¿Í ¿ÏÀü ¶È°°¾Æ¿ä.¤Ð
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WFS JaeWon 2012-06-25 22:07:13
Great work! Really this has some great quality effort!
I see you've really taken the time and you have really impressed me.
Fine job and keep it up!
sophie 2012-06-24 16:28 

Áß1 ¼ÒÇÇÀÔ´Ï´Ù^^

¾Ë·Áµå¸±°Ô Àִµ¥¿ä, ¹®¹ý¹®Á¦ 4¹ø Á¦°¡ ³½°Ô ¾Æ´Õ´Ï´Ù!!

Àç¿ø»ù²²¼­ ³»½Å°Å¿¹¿ä!!

¶Ç, 3¹ø ¹®Á¦ ÁýÀÇ Æò¸éµµµµ Àç¿ø»ù²²¼­ µ¡ºÙ¿© ÁֽŰ̴ϴÙ.

Àç¿ø»ù °¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù~! >O<

WFS JaeWon 2012-06-24 19:38:55
And here is our leader, Sophie! I'm going to be brief? Do you know why?
Because it is good enough for me to not say much. I'll give you a thumbs up.
You never disappoint me!
ÇÏÀ̵𸾠2012-06-24 20:28:09
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Jenn 2012-06-24 22:38:38
ÁßÇлýÀÌ µÈ ¼ÒÇÇÀÇ ¹Ì¼ÇÀÌ ´õ¿í ÈǸ¢ÇØ Á³³×¿ä.
¿ì¸® ºÏŬ·´ ºÎ¹ÝÀåÀÌ µÈ°Íµµ ÃàÇÏÇØ¿ä.!!
¾ÕÀ¸·Îµµ ÅåÅå Æ¢´Â ÁÁÀº ¹®Á¦ ¸¹ÀÌ ³»ÁÖ½Ã±æ ±â´ëÇÒ²²¿ä.^^
º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-25 09:27:34
·ç½Ã´Â ¸ÅÁÖ ¼ÒÇÇ ¾ð´ÏÀÇ ¹Ì¼ÇÀÌ ¿Ã¶ó¿À±â¸¸ ±â´Ù·Á¿ä.
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°¨Åº °¨Åº...^^. ´Ã ¸ð¹üÀ» º¸¿©Á༭ Á¤¸» °¨»çÇØ¿ä~
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±¸±¸½º 2012-06-24 11:48 

grade 5 Alvin

¼ÒÇÇ´©³ªÀÇ ¹®¹ý ¹®Á¦´Â ¾ö¸¶¿¡°Ô SOS¸¦~~

 

sophie 2012-06-24 19:25:52
¾ÙºóÀÇ ÁýÀº ÆĽºÅÚ »öÄ¥ÀÌ µÇ¾îÀÖ´Â °Í °°¾Æ ³Ñ À̻ڳ׿ä. ^^
ÁöÇÏ Àº½Åó¿¡ ´ëÇÇÇÒ ÀÏÀÌ ¾ø¾î¾ß ÇÒÅÙµ¥... ±×ÁÒ? ¤¾¤¾ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇ߳׿ä.
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-24 19:37:34
Alvin, good job. I see you've put in effort but I do believe your answers can be longer.
I think you were quite curious on the last question with the grammar error.
I'll tell you the answer tomorrow when I post next week's assignment.
ÇÏÀ̵𸾠2012-06-24 20:29:00
ÇÏÀ̵ð¿Ð-»öÄ¥ÀÌ ³Ñ À̻ڳ׿ä..^^
º¸¹°1È£ 2012-06-25 09:34:59
¾ÙºóÀÌ Á¤¼ºÀ» ´ã»Ò ´ã¾Æ ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» Âü ÀßÇ߳׿ä.
ÀûµéÀÌ ¾ÙºóÀÇ Áý¿¡´Â µé¾î°¡±â ¾î·Æ°Ú´Â°É¿ä. °æº¸ÀåÄ¡¶û ÀÚµ¿È­½Ã½ºÅÛÀ¸·Î öÅ뺸¾ÈÀÌ µÇ¾î Àֳ׿ä.
¾Æµé Àß µÎ¼Ì¾î¿ë~
anthropo 2012-06-24 10:22 

6Çгâ Ŭ·¹¾îÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

JaeWon ¿Àºü, I want to thank you for all the work you've done for us~!

 

 

±¸±¸½º 2012-06-24 11:51:42
Ŭ·¹¾î ¿­½ÉÈ÷ Àß Ç߳׿ä~
±Û±¸ °úÁ¦¸¦ Áñ±â¸é¼­ Àç¹Õ°Ô ÇÑ °Í °°¾Æ¿ä..
sophie 2012-06-24 19:34:48
Ŭ·¹¾îÀÇ ±â¹ßÇÑ ¾ÆÀ̵ð¾î°¡ ºûÀ» ¹ßÇß½À´Ï´Ù. ^^
Â÷¼ÓÀÇ ÀÎÇü¸ð¾ç °¨½ÃÄ«¸Þ¶ó°¡ ÀÖ´Ù´Â °ÍÀ» ¾Æ¹«µµ ´«Ä¡Ã¤Áö ¸øÇÒ °Í °°¾Æ¿ä. º£°³±îÁö ³ª¸¦ ÁöÄÑÁٰŶó »ý°¢ÇÏ´Ï ¾ÆÁÖ ¸¶À½ µçµçÇÑ ÁýÀÔ´Ï´Ù. Á¤¸» ±¸¼®±¸¼® ¾îµð ºóÆ´ Çϳª ¾øÀÌ ¸¸µé Á¤µµ·Î »ý°¢À» ¸¹ÀÌ Ç߳׿ä. ´ë´ÜÇÕ´Ï´Ù. ^^
WFS JaeWon 2012-06-24 19:35:44
Thank you Ŭ·¹¾î, I really appreciate it. By the way, I'm still going to be continuing to lead this bookclub for a while. I'm not leaving yet.
I really want to praise you for the great work you did this week.
I believe you will show me such quality more! Adios
¿¹»ÛÄíÅ° 2012-06-24 23:38:02
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literacy 2012-06-24 09:10 

Veronica Grade 4

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Áö³­¹ø Ã¥Àº ´ëÃâ ½ÅûÇÏ°í ÇÑÂüÀ» ±â´Ù·Á¼­ ¾ÆÁ÷ ¹Ì¼ÇÀ» ¸øÇÞ±¸¿ä ¸ÕÀú Á¦¶ó´Ï¸ð À̹ø °úÁ¦ºÎÅÍ ¸ÕÀú ¿Ã¸³´Ï´Ù.

 

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When I first saw your handwriting, I thought it was cursive. Haha, it looked that way.
I see you worked very hard and you've shown me quality work. I'm impressed.
Continue to make me happy!
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I'm glad you enjoyed this assignment. I thought this book was quite interesting and fun as well.
I guess you and I are on the same page on that.
Your work is good but I do believe it can be better and longer.
I'll hope to see more quality next week!
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Thanks for welcoming Alex; he's excited, too.
You've done some quality work but I do believe it could be better.
It's neat but I think it should be longer.
Keep it up!
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So neat! So good!
What a superb job you've done again Lucy. This is very very impressive.
Keep doing this again and again for me, ok? Adios
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WFS JaeW.. 2012/07/14 2,035
2621

 GS #5 Four mice deep in the jungle

[98]
WFS Alex.. 2012/07/09 5,744
2601

 Big News

[1]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/07/01 2,124
2599

 Hey, I'm Alex!

[22]
WFS Alex.. 2012/06/29 3,767
2587

 GS #4 + Grammar #3

[106]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/25 5,370
2578

 GS #3 + Alex Park

[115]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/19 6,648
2575

 Little Notice

[1]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/18 2,308
2554

 GS #2 - The Curse of the Cheese Pyramid

[106]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/11 4,992
2543

 GS #1 Emerald Eye

[175]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/06 8,288
2512

 12±â »õ ȸ¿ø ¹× »õ Ãâ¹ß °øÁö

[15]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/27 4,038
2494

 Andrew Lost #8 In the Garden

[40]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/15 3,624
2473

 Andrew Lost #7 - In the Jungle

[43]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/08 4,432
2460

 Andrew Lost #6 - Under Water

[48]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/01 3,868
2423

 Andrew Lost 5 - In Time

[45]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/04/16 3,607
2408

 Andrew Lost 4 - In the Deep

[89]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/04/10 3,680
2391

 Andrew Lost - On the Reef

[59]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/04/02 4,042
2374

 Andrew Lost 2 - In the Whale

[51]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/27 4,201
2336

 Andrew Lost - On the Dog

[88]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/11 5,588
2331

 Step Into Reading 8 - The Trail of Tears

[25]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/08 4,112
2329

 SIR 8 - To the Top

[32]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/03/08 2,836
2308

 Step into Reading 7 - Trojan Horse

[79]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/02/29 4,669
2280

 Step Into Reading 6 - T. Rex, Hunter or Scavenger

[106]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/20 3,894
2260

 Step into Reading 5 - Moonwalk The First Trip to the Moon

[90]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/13 3,671
2235

 Step Into Reading 4 - Basketball¡¯s Greatest Players

[96]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/06 3,978