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[12]GS #5 Four mice deep in the jungle

±Û¾´ÀÌ WFS Alex

µî·ÏÀÏ 2012-07-09 22:23

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http://www.suksuk.co.kr/momboard/CAX_090/3442

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Geronimo Stilton #5.pdf (68.11KB)

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Hello, everyone!!
It's really nice to meet you again in two weeks!
How did your exams go?
I'm sure that you all did well.

 

Did you enjoy your weekend without any pressure for exam preparation?
I am actually from Busan even though I am now living in Seoul to study SAT.
So I went to Busan to visit my family and get some rest.

 

I think the book was really interesting. Probably the most interesting book I've read recently.
Especially I liked the part when Geronimo tricked Penelope when she tried to wake him up with cold water.
I think that scene showed Geronimo's both physical and mental change; he was becoming a real man!
I bet you all enjoyed this book as I did too.

Thank you for your kind and long introductions about yourself and I really enjoyed them a lot!

I think ÈÖÀ± asked me to show my picture right? But, I am too shy to post my photo on this wall. I'm sorry.
But if you have a Facebook, type Alex Hyunwook Park and then you'll find my page.
I hope you don't get disappointed ¤»¤».

 

This is my first time making questions so I'm a bit nervous.

Hope you enjoy it, though.

Have a great week!!!


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Jenn 2012-07-24 23:54:09
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sophie 2012-07-18 15:44:40
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WFS Alex 2012-07-16 23:42:29
Great job on your last question and your summary! I'm sure that you will ace the next exams so don't worry too much. Your contents look awesome and your answers show that you understood what the book is trying to say. But next time, try to write a little bit more. It will be a little bit hard at first, but if you get used to it, you will be able to write very easily!! I can see that you put a lot of effort on this assignment and I appreciate that! Keep up you sincerity!!!
sophie 2012-07-17 11:10:26
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WFS Alex 2012-07-16 23:33:37
Your way of writing "questions" is so cute! Your summary looks great and other questions too. And I'm impressed that you tell disappointed people that you love them. I can see that it is really a effective and special way to console others. That's wonderful. Everything looks excellent but if you had explained what happened after Geronimo hid behind his cabin door, your answer would have been much better. But it is a trivial mistake so don't worry. I'm sure that you will improve much more next time! Excellent job on this assignment!!
sophie 2012-07-17 11:13:55
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Grace¸¾ 2012-07-16 15:44 

ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-07-16 16:34:13
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WFS Alex 2012-07-16 23:27:15
Great job Grace!! And I'm sure that you'll get a perfect score on the math exam next time!! I like the way you make others feel better. I think it is one of the most mature ways to console others. The contents of all your answers look excellent. You answered every questions correctly with good English. But if you can make your work longer next time, it would be much better!! I'll look forward to see "more perfect" answers next time!
sophie 2012-07-17 11:23:31
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WFS Alex 2012-07-16 23:20:37
Nice work! But I can see that you didn't really get the third reading comprehension question. Do you remember that P.P was trying to wake people up with a bucket of cold water? That was what the question actually asked for. But it's just a minor mistake and I'm pretty sure that you'll improve a lot more next time. Everything else looks wonderful!! Fighting!!
sophie 2012-07-17 11:37:57
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sophie 2012-07-15 21:12 

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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 22:58:09
Congratulation first for your good exam results! And I am very surprised that you use same method as I do to make others feel good. I sometimes consult his or her problem and give a solution. I always think that seriousness is very effective when trying to make others happy.
Others, your answers for the questions, are also a paradigm!! Great job and thank you for helping me and cheering me making questions!!
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¾Æ³ªÀ̽º 2012-07-15 21:47:56
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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 22:51:40
Have you found my Facebook page? Hope you are not depressed ¤»¤». Your work is really colorful and cute. They look very active and the activeness shows your eagerness! I also like your drawings. Keep up this great work!! Excellent job!
¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-07-16 11:01:48
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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 22:42:52
I'm very impressed and moved by your answer to Sophie's question. I totally agree with you that letter has the writer's love in it. That is really a effective method to make others feel good.
Things that you can improve a little bit is writing some more. With a little more of answers, you will improve your answers much more. Fighting!!!
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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 22:29:44
Nice work Alvin! I am impressed that you give cakes to make people feel better. That is pretty interesting idea. Just one minor error: don't forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word of the sentence. Everything else was very good. I hope you to continue this excellent work!
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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 21:54:25
Your "simple" answers were not simple. They were adequately long, well written, and properly answered. Especially in the second reading comprehension question, you thought further and explained that B.B could not read the compass. It was a high-quality work and keep this work up. Fighting!!!
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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 21:38:49
Excellent work!!! Every one of your answers is exactly what I expected and it is just a paragon. I am also really impressed by your neat and clean handwriting. I am 100% sure that you will continue this such great work!!
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Superb Mirielle!! I can see you pondering about the first reading comprehension question from the pencil marks on the question... I'm sorry that I could not make the question clear. Everything else looks wonderful and I appreciate your effort. Your answer of the last question, especially, shows well that you are very diligent and hard working student.
You deserve to be praised for your work!! Keep up the excellence!!
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WFS Alex 2012-07-15 20:30:05
Great job Vicky! I can see that you put much effort on this assignment.
Especially I like the way you make peace with your friend. You definitely deserve to be proud of yourself. Excellent work!! Keep it up!!
sophie 2012-07-15 22:42:57
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WFS Alex 2012-07-14 13:29:11
Superb work!! Especially second and third reading comprehension questions are just perfect.
Actually, your answer for the first reading comprehension question is not the answer I expected but now I can see that question is too vague... I'm Sorry. It is my fault so don't worry. I'll try to make questions clear next time.
Your summary is also really good except a minor mistake at the end. I think you meant except right?
Great job!! Keep it up!!
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anthropo 2012-07-14 11:39 

Hi, Alex. This is Claire's mom. Thanks for volunteering to take the lead of this bookclub with JaeWon.

Claire might not be able to meet the deadline of Sunday, 'cause she does not have the book yet.

I'll try hard to get her the book during the weekend, and she'll manage to do the work in a day or so.

And hope you would not be dissapointed at most of the "missions" being late. You know, procrastinating is a sort of human nature. :) ¤Ì¤Ì  BTW, i think the manner in which you and JaeWon work for this bookclub is fantastic, and you guys are really cool making questions for kids' book, pondering upon the structure of the stories and contents. We all here really appreciate it.  

 

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WFS Alex 2012-07-14 12:32:24
I love your last picture! It's so cute! Overall, you did great job and it proves that you really read well and enjoyed the book. The only thing you can improve is length but since you are taking a vacation, just try to write a little bit more next time. Great Job! Have a nice vacation!!
literacy 2012-07-14 17:04:57
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sophie 2012-07-10 20:45 

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WFS Alex 2012-07-12 23:47:50
Thank you so much Sophie.. both for helping me to be relieved and for helping me making questions!

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WFS JaeW.. 2012/07/14 2,043
2621

 GS #5 Four mice deep in the jungle

[98]
WFS Alex.. 2012/07/09 5,746
2601

 Big News

[1]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/07/01 2,125
2599

 Hey, I'm Alex!

[22]
WFS Alex.. 2012/06/29 3,772
2587

 GS #4 + Grammar #3

[106]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/25 5,384
2578

 GS #3 + Alex Park

[115]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/19 6,651
2575

 Little Notice

[1]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/18 2,314
2554

 GS #2 - The Curse of the Cheese Pyramid

[106]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/11 4,997
2543

 GS #1 Emerald Eye

[175]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/06/06 8,297
2512

 12±â »õ ȸ¿ø ¹× »õ Ãâ¹ß °øÁö

[15]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/27 4,043
2494

 Andrew Lost #8 In the Garden

[40]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/15 3,637
2473

 Andrew Lost #7 - In the Jungle

[43]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/08 4,435
2460

 Andrew Lost #6 - Under Water

[48]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/05/01 3,868
2423

 Andrew Lost 5 - In Time

[45]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/04/16 3,612
2408

 Andrew Lost 4 - In the Deep

[89]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/04/10 3,682
2391

 Andrew Lost - On the Reef

[59]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/04/02 4,044
2374

 Andrew Lost 2 - In the Whale

[51]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/27 4,202
2336

 Andrew Lost - On the Dog

[88]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/11 5,588
2331

 Step Into Reading 8 - The Trail of Tears

[25]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/03/08 4,113
2329

 SIR 8 - To the Top

[32]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/03/08 2,842
2308

 Step into Reading 7 - Trojan Horse

[79]
È«¹Ú»ù 2012/02/29 4,669
2280

 Step Into Reading 6 - T. Rex, Hunter or Scavenger

[106]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/20 3,894
2260

 Step into Reading 5 - Moonwalk The First Trip to the Moon

[90]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/13 3,676
2235

 Step Into Reading 4 - Basketball¡¯s Greatest Players

[96]
WFS JaeW.. 2012/02/06 3,983