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[17]SSC#3 Handsome and Gruesome

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How are you doing everyone?

I am now completely adjusted to U.S time and back to my normal life here.

 

I now have exactly two months to finish the most important year of my life and go back to Korea. And these two months will probably be the busiest and the worst moment in Woodberry.

I hope I can do well.

 

I chose to do art for this spring trimester and it is quite interesting. I used to hate art because I am not that good at drawing and also, I don't like staying still for two hours for drawing something.

But since I began to make my own work, I am being immersed in art. From today, I am going to work on a project with two other people. We decided to make the biggest building in my school with LEGO.

It will be very fun.

 

You are doing great job on your works. But, for some people, you should write more than what you think is enough. It is important to write correct answers, but it is better to write a lot, especially for the questions asking your opinions.

 

Have a nice week and I will be waiting for some solid works.


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WFS Alex 2013-04-08 09:04:41
Hi MJ!!
I first want to praise you for your answers of the last part. You are supporting your thoughts very well with appropriate reasons. Very well done. I am very happy to see such great work.
I was impressed with the grammatical corrections you made with a pen. Did you do it by yourself? I appreciate your enthusiasm for learning. I will try to help you on grammar from now on if possible.
Nice job on other parts. Your own ending seems to be a little bit short, but I believe you can care about everything from next time.
Very impressive job and thank you.
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WFS Alex 2013-04-08 08:52:42
Hello Rachel!!!
Good job on making your own ending. I thought I was reading a new book! It was certainly very interesting.
Also, very nice job on supporting your thought with specific reasons. This is exactly what I hoped to see.
But if you had been a little bit more specific on question 2 (1), by explaining why handsome and gruesome were the obstacles for the scarecrow to win the competition, this work could have been a perfect work.
Still, you did a wonderful job and I appreciate your effort!
See you next week!
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WFS Alex 2013-04-08 08:46:10
Hi Ryan!!
Excellent work on this assignment.
Your answer about the difference between the original and this parody was exactly what I expected and your ending was very creative. Also, very good job on the last part where you explain your thoughts with proper reasons.
Very great job this week and keep it up!
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WFS Alex 2013-04-08 08:42:40
Hello Marry!
First, very good job on your assignment.
I liked your ending very much, even though it was short. Handsome and Gruesome's turning into flowers sounds like an actual ending of a book.
The only thing you could have done better was the last part. You didn't write any reason for your answers. Remember, you should have a reason for your own thought when you are working on these assignments.
Nice job on everything else, and I hope to see a better work!

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 SSC#8 The Ugly Duck Thing

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 SSC#7 The Silly Willy Billy Goats

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 An Announcement

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 SSC#6 The Princess and the Tree

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 SSC#5 The Little Marzipan Man

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 SSC#4 The Elves and the Storymaker

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 SSC#3 Handsome and Gruesome

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 SSC#2 Freddy Frogface

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 SSC#1 Bleeping Beauty with an introduction to the new series

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 SA#10 Chocolate - A Sweet History

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 SA#9 Money - A Rich History

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 A short announcement.

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 SA#8 Negro Leagues - All-Black Baseball

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