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Lucy 2010-05-13 15:06 

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To Forgive Is To Give

3

Forgiving Opens Your Heart

4

How To Forgive

5

What Does Forgiving Look Like

6

Holding On To Hurt Is Hard On You!

7

Forgive is freeing

8

Look through another¡¯s eyes

9

Feelings come and go

10

When others are unkind

11

Wise people teach forgiveness

12

When you mark a mistake

13

Forgive yourself

14

Living in a forgiving world

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

 

Topics: _Forgiving opens your heart____

       _How to forgive______

 

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        ____2________min ___ 3 _______sec

2

____2________min ___15______sec

3

____1_________min ___30______sec

 

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

¨ç bump

___I bump into Jamy____________________________________________.

¨è share

___Oren shares book with Gram______________.

¨é neighborhood:

 __My best neighborhood is Andy_____________.

¨ê neighbor

___I have many neighbor___________________.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

Pick only two questions and write the answer. I want to hear about your own story.

One of them should include (1), (3) or (5).

(2°³¸¸ °ñ¶ó¼­ Ã¥À» ÀÐ°í ´äÇϸ鼭 Àڱ⠻ý°¢À» ¾¹´Ï´Ù. 2°³ Áß 1°³´Â (1), (3) or (5) Áß ÅÃÇϼ¼¿ä.)

(1)#3

Have you ever been disappointed at your parents? For example, they said they would take you to an amusement park this weekend, but that didn¡¯t happen. You must feel sad and angry at the broken promise. Tell us when your parents got you disappointed and how you felt.

My parents and My friend¡¯s parents said ¡°have party in summer.¡±

So summer came. But they said ¡°in winter.¡±

So Winter came. But they said ¡°in spring.¡±

So I was mad and sad

 

 

 

 

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨ç__¡±I¡¯m okay¡± or ¡°you¡¯re my friend.¡±_____

¨è__¡±I know you didn¡¯t matter¡± and ¡°I¡¯ll let is pass.¡±__

¨é__¡±You are kind at friend¡± or ¡°you make me happy.¡±___

 

¼÷Á¦°¡ ³Ñ ´Ê¾úÁÒ..

¿©Çà´Ù³à¿À°í³ª¼­ Çб³ ¼÷Á¦¿¡ Çà»ç°¡ °ãÃļ­ ´Ê¾ú³×¿ä.

 

 

Angela 2010-05-12 10:44 

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To Forgive is to give

3

Forgiving Opens Your Heart

4

How To Forgive

5

What Does Forgiving Look Like?

6

Holding on to Hurt is Hard on you

7

Forgiving Is Freeing

8

Looking through Another¡¯s Eyes

9

Feelings come and Go

10

When Others Are Unkind

11

Wise People Teach Forgiveness

12

When You make a mistake

13

Forgive Yourself

14

Living in a Forgiving World

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

Topics: _ Wise People Teach Forgiveness _

 When You make a mistake

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        _____1_________min ____05_______sec

2

_____1_________min ____27_______sec

3

_____1_________min ____53_______sec

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

¨ç    bump
I bump to my computer. - I got bumped to my computer.

¨è    Share
I share with candy to Anna. - I shared my candy with Anna.

¨é    neighborhood:
There was my neighborhood¡¯s house! _ There are many houses in my neighborhood.

¨ê    neighbor
I want to give a food to neighbor. - I want to share foods with my neighbors.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

Pick only two questions and write the answer. I want to hear about your own story.

One of them should include (1), (3) or (5).

(4)#10

When someone hurts you, what kinds of things can you do?

When someone hurts me, I want to hit him. But I don¡¯t and think, think.

 

(5)#11

Read aloud ¡°Wise people teach forgiveness¡± 3 times, and then rewrite the story of either Nelson Mandela or Jesus Christ.

Many people all over the world honor the words and example of Jesus.

He taught his friends to friends to forgive other people just as they want to be forgiven.

Jesus was so strong that he even forgave the people who killed him.

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Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 14:30:55
Please check my correctoin.
It's written in blue.
»¡°­¸Ó¸®¾Ø 2010-05-12 16:40:22
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¼ö¹ÎStella 2010-05-11 22:43 

A Guidebook for Kids

#3 Forgiving is Smart for Your Heart

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To forgiving is to give

3

Forgiving opens your heart

4

How to forgive

5

What does forgiving look like?

6

Holding on to hurt is hard – on you

7

Forgiving is freeing

8

Looking through Another¡¯ eye

9

Feelings come and go

10

When others are unkind

11

Wise people tech Forgiveness

12

When you make a mistake

13

Forgive yourself

14

Living in a forgiving world

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

 

Topics: Topic4

       Topic8

 

Round

Elapsed Time

1

       1 min  28 sec

2

1 min 26 sec

3

1 min 12 sec

 

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

¨ç bump

I bumped my head on the desk.

¨è share

I share with my sister everything.  I share everything with my sister.

¨é neighborhood:

In my building many neighborhoods were living. There are many buildings in my neighborhood.

¨ê neighbor   :In my building many neighbor living. - Many neighbors live in my apartment building.

4. Comprehension & Composition

Pick only two questions and write the answer. I want to hear about your own story.

One of them should include (1), (3) or (5).

(2°³¸¸ °ñ¶ó¼­ Ã¥À» ÀÐ°í ´äÇϸ鼭 Àڱ⠻ý°¢À» ¾¹´Ï´Ù. 2°³ Áß 1°³´Â (1), (3) or (5) Áß ÅÃÇϼ¼¿ä.)

(1)#3

Have you ever been disappointed at your parents? For example, they said they would take you to an amusement park this weekend, but that didn¡¯t happen. You must feel sad and angry at the broken promise. Tell us when your parents got you disappointed and how you felt.

My father promise to go to museum but, he didn¡¯t go anywhere.

I felt disappointed.

My mom said she felt angry.

 

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨ç I¡¯m okay. It¡¯s okay. I know you didn¡¯t mean it.

¨è You¡¯re my friend. I love you. It¡¯s okay.

¨é I¡¯m sorry. We have to understand other peoples mind.

 

Dr. HOng 2010-05-12 14:41:22
Please check my correction.
It's written in red.
»¡°­¸Ó¸®¾Ø 2010-05-12 16:35:48
Did your dad promise you to took you to go to a museum?
so you must be very disappointed.. oh, poor ¼ö¹Î..
But why did your mom get angry????
¼ö´Ù¸¾ 2010-05-12 17:36:21
Thank you !!
¼ö´Ù¸¾ 2010-05-11 16:46 

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ÀÌÁ¦ Á¶±Ý¾¿ Âü¿©ÇÏ°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

»¡°­¸Ó¸®¾Ø 2010-05-11 10:24 

A¹Ý ¾î¸Ó´Ôµé.. Á¦°¡ ¾ÆÀ̵éÀ̳ª ¾î¸Ó´ÏµéÀÌ ´©±ºÁö ¸ð¸£°í Á¶¸¦ ®À½¿¡µµ ºÒ±¸ÇÏ°í(1Â÷ ¹Ì¼Ç ¿Ã¸° ¼ø¼­ µ¹¾Æ°¡¸ç ®±â ¶§¹®¿¡ ³ª¸§ °øÁ¤ÇÏ´Ù°í »ý°¢ÇßÀ½) ÀÌ·¸°Ô ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÇÏ´Â ºÐµé¸¸ ¸ð¿´³×¿ä.

 

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Ȥ½Ã Áú¹®ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¸é ±×°Í¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ´äµµ ½á º¼ ¼ö ÀÖµµ·Ï ÇØÁֽðھî¿ä?

 

ÀÌ ¾ÆÀ̵éÀÌ ÀÌ °÷¿¡¼­ Àå¼öÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖµµ·Ï ¸¹Àº °Ý·Á ºÎŹµå·Á¿ä~~!

Lynn 2010-05-11 01:41 

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To Forgive is to give

3

Forgiving opens your heart

4

How to forgive

5

What does forgiving look like?

6

Holding on to hurt is hard-on you!

7

Forgiving is freeing

8

Looking through another eyes

9

Feeling come and go

10

When others are unkind

11

Wise people teach forgiveness

12

When you make a mistake

13

Forgive yourself

14

Living in a forgiving world

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

 

Topics: What does forgiving look like?

      Holding in to hurt is hard-on you!

    

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        ______1________min _____20.26_______sec

2

______1________min ______14.52______sec

3

______1________min ______7.37_____sec

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

¨ç bump : Today, I accidently got bumped with my friend, so I said sorry to my friend.

¨è share : I shared my stuff with my friend because she didn¡¯t bring it.

                           (Please write what it is instead of stuff. )

¨é neighborhood: There are many kinds of academies in my neighborhood.

¨ê neighbor : Sometimes I meet my neighbor in the elevator who is a little old.  

 

(3)#8

I used to hate a boy who always wore dirty clothes. I found he had no parents and stayed at his grandma¡¯s. She was too old to take care of him well. I felt sorry for him because if I were him, I would also have to wear dirty clothes. ¡®Looking through other¡¯s eyes¡¯ is this difficult. Tell us what could be another example of ¡®looking other¡¯s eyes.¡¯

 

 My mom always say ¡°Do the homework¡± ¡°Write your diary¡± ¡°Do you have finished the mission?¡± ect..

I understand when I didn¡¯t do that, but my mom even say that things when I do well or I¡¯m starting to do.

I want my mom ¡°Look through my eyes¡±, and don¡¯t say like that.

 

(4)#10

When someone hurts you, what kinds of things can you do?

(Ã¥ ³»¿ëÀ» ÂüÁ¶ÇÏ¿© ¾²¼¼¿ä)

When someone hurts me, I will think before I do anything else.

Then I will forgive it at once.

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You could understand what your mom said when you didn't do your job. right?
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esthermom 2010-05-11 13:10:10
Good Job!
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Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 14:46:37
Plese check my correction.
No major errors are there, though.
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2010-05-10 22:01 

A Guidebook for Kids

#3 Forgiving is Smart for Your Heart

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To forgive is to give

3

Forgiving opens your heart

4

How to forgive

5

What does forgiving look like?

6

Holding on to hurt is hard on you!

7

Forgiving is freeing

8

Looking through another¡¯s eyes

9

Feeling come and go

10

When others are unkind

11

Wise people teach forgiveness

12

When you make a mistake

13

Forgive yourself

14

Living in a forgiving world

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

 

Topics: __3.Forgiving opens your heart__________________________________________

       _4___How to forgive________________________________________

 

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        _____1_________min ____48________sec

2

_____1_________min ______43______sec

3

_________1_____min ______38_____sec

 

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

__bump      I   bumped my head to the desk.

¨è share

____________I will share my ice-cream with my sister.____

¨é neighborhood: ________I have many good people in my neighborhood.

¨ê neighbor

______My neighbors are kind to me and my family.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨ç    _I will say ¡°Don¡¯t do it next time¡±

¨è     

¨é    _or Next time I think you do well_

 

 

 (5)#11

Read aloud ¡°Wise people teach forgiveness¡± 3 times, and then rewrite the story of either Nelson Mandela or Jesus Christ.

About Mandela, Mandela is good president. At the young he study hard.

Someday he goes to jail for 27 years.

Oneday the white people come on and black people is poor.

White people take black people land. Mandela is good at people,

Everyone claped for him. And Mandela gave people a forgiveness and love.

 

 

 

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Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 14:50:17
Please check my correction in your sentence writing
esther 2010-05-10 16:11 

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To Forgive Is to Give

3

Forgiving Opens Your Heart

4

How to Forgive

5

What Does Forgiving Look Like?

6

Holding On to Hurt Is Hard-on You

7

Forgiving is Freeing

8

Looking Through Another¡¯s Eyes

9

Feelings Come and Go

10

When Others Are Unkind

11

Wise People Teach Forgiveness

12

When You Make a Mistake

13

Forgive Yourself

14

Living in a Forgiving world

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

 

Topics: How to Forgive

       Forgiving Opens Your Heart

 

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        1 min 22 sec

2

0 min 55 sec

3

0 min 55 sec

 

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

¨ç bump

On the Sunday the one ant bump! His head at the other ant while the ant holding the food.

On Sunday one ant bumped his head to other ant while the two were carrying foods.

 

¨è share

Some day all of the Korea people would share to everyone.

Someday all Koreans will share things with each other.

 

¨é neighborhood: I think all of the neighborhood have the another school that all different

I think there are many different schools in all neighborhoods.

 

¨ê neighbor: My neighbor is very kind.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

Pick only two questions and write the answer. I want to hear about your own story.

One of them should include (1), (3) or (5).

(2°³¸¸ °ñ¶ó¼­ Ã¥À» ÀÐ°í ´äÇϸ鼭 Àڱ⠻ý°¢À» ¾¹´Ï´Ù. 2°³ Áß 1°³´Â (1), (3) or (5) Áß ÅÃÇϼ¼¿ä.)

(1)#3

Have you ever been disappointed at your parents? For example, they said they would take you to an amusement park this weekend, but that didn¡¯t happen. You must feel sad and angry at the broken promise. Tell us when your parents got you disappointed and how you felt.

Have you ever been disappointed at parent:: I do not anything and my brother did big deal and my mom and father only angry at me

Have you ever been disappointed at parent:: When my parents did not doing promises.

Said and have an angry and betrayal.

 

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨ç      It¡¯s Ok.

¨è      I¡¯m Ok

¨é  I know you didn¡¯t mean it.

 

(3)#8

I used to hate a boy who always wore dirty clothes. I found he had no parents and stayed at his grandma¡¯s. She was too old to take care of him well. I felt sorry for him because if I were him, I would also have to wear dirty clothes. ¡®Looking through other¡¯s eyes¡¯ is this difficult. Tell us what could be another example of ¡®looking other¡¯s eyes.¡¯

 

My house has a dirty TV but I found were house TV is most good and expensive.

I have a hate boy who always scold at teacher but I found he was helping and being scold at teacher

 

 

 

(4)#10

When someone hurts you, what kinds of things can you do?

(Ã¥ ³»¿ëÀ» ÂüÁ¶ÇÏ¿© ¾²¼¼¿ä)

Feel it¡¯s Ok

Give a chance to she or he

 

 

 

(5)#11

Read aloud ¡°Wise people teach forgiveness¡± 3 times, and then rewrite the story of either Nelson Mandela or Jesus Christ.

Many people all over the world honor the words and example of Jesus. He taught his friends to forgive other people just as they want to be forgiven. Jesus was so strong that he even forgave the people who killed him.

 

»¡°­¸Ó¸®¾Ø 2010-05-10 22:36:25
Esther¾ß. ³ÊÀÇ brotherµµ ¾Æ¸¶ ÀڱⰡ ºÎ¸ð´Ô²² ´õ È¥³ª°í ÀÖ´Ù°í »ý°¢ÇÒÁöµµ ¸ô¶ó. ¼­·Î°¡ ¼­·Î¿¡°Ô ½Ç¸ÁÇÏ°í ½Ç¸ÁÀ» ÁÖ±ä ÇÏÁö¸¸ °¡Á·À̶õ ±×·± °ÍµéÀ» ¸¶À½¿¡ Ç°Áö ¾Ê°í '±×·³¿¡µµ ºÒ±¸ÇÏ°í »ç¶û'ÇÏ´Â »ç¶÷µéÀ̶õ´Ù.
Would you explain about the boy who always scolded by your teacher? And why didn't you like him?
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2010-05-10 23:36:55
EstherÀÇ ±ÛÀ» ÀÐÀ¸´Ï. ºÎ¸ð´ÔµéÀÌ ¾à¼ÓÀ» ¾ÈÁöų¶§ ¿ì¸® Ä£±¸µéÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ ½Ç¸ÁÇϴ±¸³ª,
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Kate 2010-05-11 01:47:28
¿¡½º´õ°¡ µ¿»ý¶§¹®¿¡ ¾ï¿ïÇÑ ÀÏÀÌ °¡²û ÀÖ±¸³ª.
±×·±¶© Á¤¸» ¸¹ÀÌ ¼Ó»óÇÏ°Ú´Ù. ±×¶© ¾ö¸¶¿¡°Ô Â÷±ÙÂ÷±Ù ÀÌÀ¯¸¦ ¼³¸íÇغ¸¸é ¾î¶³±î?
Please tell us that kind of situation in detail if you have~
Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 14:56:43
Please check my correction.
It's written in red.
Blossom 2010-05-10 11:51 
 

A Guidebook for Kids

#3 Forgiving is Smart for Your Heart

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To forgive is to give

3

Forgiving opens your heart

4

How to forgive

5

What does forgiving look like?

6

Holding on to Hurt is hard on you!

7

Forgiving is Freeing

8

Looking through another's eyes

9

Feelings come and go

10

When others are unkind

11

Wise people teach forgiveness

12

When you make a mistake

13

Forgive yourself

14

Living in a forgiving world

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly. 

Topics:   ____Forgiving opens your heart._____

         ____How to Forgive_________

 

Round

Elapsed   Time

1

          _____2______min ____33________sec

2

______2________min _____6_______sec

3

______2________min _____13______sec

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

¨ç bump

___My grandmother had a bump in the left arm___________.

¨è share

__I share my glue with my best friend____.

¨é neighborhood: ___My neighbor created a beautiful garden _.

Many people in my neighborhood have beautiful gardens.

 

¨ê neighbor

___My neighbor is very angry at me because I broke his garden____.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

Pick only twoquestionsandwritetheanswer.Iwanttohearaboutyourownstory.

One of them should include (1), (3) or (5).

(1)#3

Have you ever been disappointed at your parents? For example, they said they would take you to an amusement park this weekend, but that didn¡¯t happen. You must have felt sad and angry at the broken promise. Tell us when your parents got you disappointed and how you felt.

 My mom said were going to the library.

 But my mom was so busy that she didn't keep a promise.

 I was sad and angry.

 I stomped my feet and I screamed NOOOOOOO!

 Mom said no. I went to my room, shut the door and didn't say anything.

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨ç____I know you didn't mean it.____

¨è____It's ok. I'll let it pass.____

¨é____I'm ok. But please don't do that any more.______

¸Ç³¯ ¼÷Á¦¸¦ ¸¶°¨ 1-2½Ã°£ Àü¿¡ ¿Ã¸®´Ù°¡ ÀÌ·¸°Ô ÀÏÂï ¿Ã¸®´Ï±î °¨°Ý½º·´³×¿ä.

ÇѱÇ, ÇÑ±Ç ½Ç·Âµµ °°ÀÌ ´À´Â°Í °°¾Æ »ÑµíÇϳ׿ä.

ƯÈ÷, À̹øÁÖ´Â be-ing ÁýÂøÁõÀÌ Á» ¾ø¾îÁ³¾î¿ä. ´Ù¸¥ Ä£±¸µé ÇÏ´Â °Íµµ º¸°í Àаí ÇÏ´õ´Ï ¸¹Àº ÀÚ±ØÀÌ µÈ °Í °°½À´Ï´Ù. µþ°ú ¿©·¯ À̾߱⸦ Çϸ鼭 º¸³»´Â 5¿ùÀÇ À̽ð£µé·Î ÇູÇÑ Ãß¾ïÀ» ¸¸µé°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.  È«¹Ú½Üµµ ¾ó¸¥ ÄèÂ÷ÇϽðí¿ä. ¸ðµÎµé 5¿ùÀÇ ÇÞ»ìÀ» ¸¸³£Çϼ¼¿ä....±â¹Ì Á¶½ÉÇϽñ¸¿ë^^

 

 

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¿ª½Ã À̹øÁÖµµ ±â´ë¸¦ Àú¹ö¸®Áö ¾Ê´Â±¸³ª. ¾ö¸¶¿¡°Ô È­°¡ ³­ ºÎºÐÀº ¸¶Ä¡ ¼Ò¼³À» Àд µí Èï¹ÌÁøÁøÇß´Ü´Ù. ¸¶Ä¡ ´« ¾Õ¿¡¼­ º¸´Â °Í °°¾Æ. ¤¾¤¾
be going to ´Â ~ ÇÒ ¿¹Á¤ÀÎ °Å´Ï±î µµ¼­°ü¿¡ °¡´Â °Í go to the library¸¦ ºÙÀ̸é
My mom said we were going to go to the library.°¡ µÇ°ÚÁö?
Anyway , do you like to go to the library? What kind of books do you like to read ?
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2010-05-10 23:27:51
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Kate 2010-05-11 01:50:16
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±× ´ÙÀ½¿¡´Â ¾î¶»°Ô µÆ´Ï? ¹°·Ð ¾ö¸¶¿Í ±Ý¹æ È­ÇØÇß°ÚÁö??
Annie¸¾ 2010-05-11 06:41:04
Á¤¸»·Î ³Ê¹«³ª ¸ÚÁø ±Û¼Ø¾¾¿´¾î.
´ÙÀ½¹ø ¹Ì¼Çµµ ±â´ëÇÒ²².
esthermom 2010-05-11 13:21:53
±×·¸±¸³ª!!
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¾ÆÁܸ¶³× estherµµ blossomó·³ È­³»°í ½Ç¸ÁÇϱ⵵ Çϴµ¥, ÁøÂ¥ ¹Ì¾ÈÇÏ´Ù!!
Blossom 2010-05-11 19:47:25
¾ÆÁܸ¶µé, I like detective books like A to Z mysteries. I like to go to the library.
Thank you for your ´ñ±Û.
»¡°­¸Ó¸®¾Ø 2010-05-11 21:42:52
Thanks for your reply to my reply..¤»¤»¤»
Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 14:59:38
Please check my correction.
It's written in red.
Annie 2010-05-10 06:25 

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Kate 2010-05-11 02:01:36
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¾Ö´Ï´Â ºÐ¸íÈ÷ ¸ð¹ü»ýÀÏ°Í °°¾Æ, ¸Â´Ï? ^>^
Çб³»ýÈ°µµ ÀÌ·¸°Ô ²Ä²ÄÇÏ°Ô ÇÑ´Ù¸é Ʋ¸²¾øÁö ¸Ó.
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Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 15:01:29
1. I got bumped to my dad.
2. to a new house.

This sounds better, Annie.
nate 2010-05-10 00:32 

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To Forgive Is to give

3

Forgiving Opens Your Heart

4

How to Forgive

5

What Does forgiving look like?

6

Holding On to Hurt Is Hard On You!

7

Forgiving Is Freeing

8

Looking Through Another¡¯s Eyes

9

Feelings come and go

10

When Others Are Unkind

11

Wise People Teach Forgiveness

12

When You Make a Mistake

13

Forgive Yourself

14

Living in a Forgiving World

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

 

Topics: Your Heart is smart

       To Forgive is to Give

 

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        1min 36.54sec

2

1min 20.87sec

3

_______________min ___________sec

 

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

¨ç bump

I got bumped someone in the playground

 

¨è share

My friend has no pencil so I shared mine with him.

               ......                    so I lent one to him. (-- this sounds better.)

I shared my pencils with him because he had none.

 

¨é neighborhood:

My best friend lives in my neighborhood.

 

¨ê neighbor

My neighbors are kind.

 

4. Comprehension & Composition

Pick only three questions and write the answer. I want to hear about your own story.

One of them should include (1), (3) or (5).

 (1)#3

Have you ever been disappointed at your parents? For example, they said they would take you to an amusement park this weekend, but that didn¡¯t happen. You must feel sad and angry at the broken promise. Tell us when your parents got you disappointed and how you felt.

I said to dad. ¡°Dad, please buy that kite.¡± But my dad won¡¯t buy that kite. So I was angry and sad and mad.

 

 

 

 

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨ç¡±I¡¯m okay¡±

¨è¡±I know you didn¡¯t mean it.¡±

¨é¡±It¡¯s nothing.¡¯

 

(4)#10

When someone hurts you, what kinds of things can you do?

Think before you do anything else.

If it hurts a lot, Tell the other person to stop.

If he doesn¡¯t stop, then leave. Ask someone or wiser for help.

 

 

¾ÆÀ̶û °°ÀÌ ÁÖ¸»¿¡ Ã¥ ÀÐ°í ¼÷Á¦´Â ¾ÆÀÌ°¡ Çß¾î¿ä.^^

ŸÀÌÇεµ ÀÌÁ¨ Á¦¹ý Çϳ׿ä.

Annie¸¾ 2010-05-10 06:42:46
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Kate 2010-05-11 02:04:34
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Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 15:08:05
Please check my correction.
It's in red.
marblelin 2010-05-07 23:38 

1. Topics Telling the Theme

This book has 14 small topics write each topic in order.

#

Topics

1

Your Heart is Smart

2

To forgive is to Give 

3

 Forgiving Opens your Heart

4

 How to Forgive

5

 What Does Forgiving Liik Like

6

 Holdingt On to Hurt it Hard on you

7

 Forgiving is Freeing

8

 Liiking Through Anotther's Eyes

9

 Feelings Cme and Go

10

 When others are Unkind

11

 Wise People Teach Forgiveness

12

 When you Make a Mistake

13

 Forgive yourself

14

 Living in a Forgiving world

 

2. Speed Reading Practice

Choose two topics in a row and read them three times quickly.

(¿¬ÀÌ¾î µÎ ÅäÇÈÀ» ÀÐ°í ½Ã°£ Àç±â)

 

Topics: __Forgiving Opens Your Heart____

       _How to Forgive___________________________________________

 

Round

Elapsed Time

1

        ________1______min ______21______sec

2

______1________min ____16________sec

3

_______1________min ____9_______sec

 

3. Making sentences

Write a sentence using each word given.

 

¨ç bump

When I was holding a puppy I got bumped with my friend._____________.

 

¨è share

My friend don't have a lunch. So I share my lunch with my friend.

 

¨é neighborhood:

I wonder what's in my neighborhood.

 

¨ê neighbor

I shared cookies with my neighbor and she shared sweet potatos with me.^__^

4. Comprehension & Composition

(1)#3

Have you ever been disappointed at your parents? For example, they said they would take you to an amusement park this weekend, but that didn¡¯t happen. You must feel sad and angry at the broken promise. Tell us when your parents got you disappointed and how you felt.

Last sunday my mom said "We are going to play inside the water" So I felt good.

But my mom kept taking pictures. 

So I disappointed at my mom. 

  

 

(2)#4

Write two expressions when you forgive others. Pick 2 from the book and think of 1 of your own.

To show forgiveness, you might say:

¨çI love you_______________

¨èI know you didn't mean it._______________

¨éI know your mind.__________

 

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Kate 2010-05-08 00:47:05
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¼º½ÇÇѵ¥´Ù ²Ä²ÄÇϱâ±îÁö! ^_^
ÀßÇß¾î~!!!!

Annie¸¾ 2010-05-10 06:39:06
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Marblelin ÃÖ°í¿¡¿ä.!!
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Dr. Hong 2010-05-12 15:11:31
Please check my correction.
It's in red.

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