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글쓴이 유돌이엄마 등록일 2001-04-18 17:15 조회수 1,027 |
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> Tuesday, April
> Today was very fine day. It wasn't windy day. It was hot rather than warm.
> So I wanted to go somewhere.
> I decided that I would go to Everland.
> Kevin liked to see animals such as tigers, monkeys, sea lions, penguins and so on.
> He seemed to be happy to see the real animals what he saw in the books.(매일 책으로만 보던 동물들을 직접 보게 되니까 좋은가 보다)
=> He seemed to be happy when he saw the real animals that he had learned through the books before.
> And so did I.
> After having lunch, Kevin tried to patted sheep and goats.
> He was surprised that the animals was moving.
> I thought that it was good experience to Kevin and it was real education indeed.(나는 이것이 케빈에게 아주 좋은 경험이었고, 이것이야말로 산교육이라고 생각했다)
=> I thought that it was a good experience to Kevin and real education indeed.('산 교육' 이란 표현을 잘 몰라서..^^;)
> After watching the animals we went to place where the tulip festival was held.
> There were very fantastic colorful flowers. Orange, red, yellow and white tulips...
> I couldn't closed my mouth because of that beauty.(나는 그 아름다움에 입을 다물수가 없었다)
=> 사전을 찾아보니깐 입을 다물다는 shut one's mouth를 쓰더군요..
근데 이런 표현은 어떤가요?
They were very beautiful, so I stared at them with my mouth wide open.
> We took photographs in there.
> We were tired out by long time walk but 마음만은 새처럼 가벼웠다.
=> We took a walk so long, so we were tired out.
마음만은 새처럼 가벼웠다.(이것도 너무 어려워서요.. ) 이렇게 써보면 어떨까요? However we refreshed ourselves. or We returned home with a light heart.
재윤맘님.. 일기쓰기 참 어렵네요.. 많은 도움이 못되서 죄송하네요..
다른 님들도 도와주세요..
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