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2005-10-16

Tittle: The big test.

The big test is close by.

In the big test, we test Korean, math, social, and science.

Because of the big test is close by, I study with 4 exercise book.

I study until it¡¯s 10:50.

When the time is there, I becomes very sleepily..

I beg mom to me to go sleep early.

But mom wouldn¡¯t listen.

She told me to study more and more!!!
Sometimes, I don¡¯t study and sleep in my desk.

Because I was too tired to study and I was so sleepy.

I bring the exercise book to school because I have no time to solve it in home.

My teacher said to bring the exercise book to study.

Before that, I bringed my exercise book too.

But buy the way, I want to get all correct in the test.

2005-10-09

Tittle;The baseball game.

Today, our family went to the baseball stadium.

In the stadium, there was so many people.

Our family¡¯s team was ¡°Hanwha¡±.

The other team¡¯s name is¡±Doosan¡±.

At first, two team tied, but at next the other team¡¯s point went up.

Their point became 6.

Do you want to know how our family¡¯s team did?

Our team¡¯s point went only 1.

So, our team lose.

If our team was ¡°Doosan¡±, we could won!!

And it would be so cool! Our seat heated sunlight.

I hated it.

The ¡°Doosan¡± team¡¯s seat was so cool!

2005.10.03

Tittle: My birthday

Today is my birthday.

When I woke up this morning, I was so exited.

When mom finished cooking, and my family are awake,

We song "Happy birthday" song and I blew off the candle.

The moment I blew up the candles, my dad poped a cracker.

After we ate breakfast, my mom, dad, and younger sister gave me a present.

It was wrapped by a wrapping paper.

Mom gave me some books.

And dad gave me some cross stitch set.

My younger sister gave me some pencil.

When we have dinner, I suggested to toast.

My dad and mom pour wine in their glass.

And I and my younger sister pour water in our glass.

And we said "HAPPY BIRTHDAY FOR SISTER!!"

I had a best birthday party ever.

Tittle: Hurricane Rita.

I saw the news today and they said the Hurricane Rita is going to USA.

I was worried. Because before, hurricane Kateria attacted New orleans.

When I heard this terrible news, I was sad.

I like USA next to Korea.

The scientist said hurricane is often come because of the Earth is getting warmer.

I hope the hurricane Rita will disappear soon.

And the USA will be safe.

USA is my favorite country!! *^^*



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