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용훈맘님의 글입니다.
> 안녕하세요, 대구에 사는 19개월된 용훈엄마입니다.
> 어제 초등학교 다니는 조카에게 Wasac 사이트를 가르쳐 주었더니 오늘 영어로 메일을 보내왔내요. 저도 영어로 답해야 될 것 같아 쓰기는 했는데 영... 와삭에 교정봐 주는 코너가 있기는 하나 지난번 시도 했다가 이용하는 학생이 '아줌마는 가라!'고 하는 통에.....
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> HI, Woung-Rae ?
Hi, Woung-rae?
> How are you ? I'm fine and your uncle too. Yong-hoon has a runny nose but not serious. Your mother told me you have been sick since the harvest festival..... I wish you better now.
How are you? I'm fine and your uncle (실은 uncle Kim등 이름을 넣으면 더 친근감이 들겠죠), too. Yong-hoon's having a runny nose but not too serious. I was told that you've been sick since the Harvest Festival holidays. ('추석'의 공식명이 이게 맞나요?? 저는 그냥 미국식으로 Thanksgiving Day라고 생각했었는데...) I wish you feel better now.
> Did you enjoy Wasac? Do you like it? I use 'Open diary' from time to time to be corrected my English writing.
Did you have fun in Wasac? (Or Did you enjoy yourself in Wasac?) Did you like it? I visit "Open diary" from time to time to get my English writing corrected.
> I think it's a very good site for the people learning English.
> You like all kinds of sport! I like to play badminton and tennis. I like to bicycle too. I brought your maternal grandmother a bicycle, but it's almost me that use it. She can't bicycle now but she want to do it. I will give her(?) lessons in bicycle after autumn harvest.
I'm excited to hear that you like all kinds of sports! I like playing badminton and tennis. I also like riding a bicycle, too. I bought one for your grandmother, but it's me who actually get to ride on it most of the times.
That's because she doesn't know how! But the good news is that she's willing to learn it. I'm going to give her some lessons after the holidays.
> Have nice days, and write me often, you too !!
Have a nice day and drop me some lines --as often as possible, okay??
> Your aunt.
Love,
Aunt xxx(이름)
> p.s.
> Would you like to help your mother to make a E-mail adress and send a E-mail ?
P.S.
Would you be able to help your mother to creat an email
address and teach her how to send it?
> I give lessons to her in Internet by telephone ten minute by day(하루에 10분).
I'm planning to give her lessons on Internet by telephone about ten minutes a day. (앞으로도 전화로 가르치겠다는 뜻일때)
I gave her lessons on Internet by telephone ten minutes today. (오늘 10분 동안 가르쳤다는 뜻일때)
> Today was the first lesson and today's homework was "Let me know your E-mail adress by E-mail.
Today was the first session and today's homework was "Let me know your email address through email."
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((영어원문만 가지고는 확실히 어떤 뜻인지 모르는것도 있고해서 나름대로 짐작해서 수정해 보았습니다. 문법적으로 틀린것은 없으나 보통때 많이 안쓰는 말들은 그냥 좀더 자연스러운 표현들로 바꾸어 보았는데 어떤지 모르겠네요. 우왕..무지 졸리우네용...그럼 도움되셨길))
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