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방학동안 전에 읽었던 매직트리 28권을 다시 한번 듣고 읽고난 후 아이가 쓴 글이예요
수정하기 시작했다가는 온통 빨간색 투성이가 될것 같아 손도 못대고 있어요
내가 맞다는 확신도 없고...
이제 2학년 올라가는데 ... 아직 갈 길이 멀게 느껴지네요
책 읽고 듣는 것은 로켓시리즈, 로얄드 달, 샬롯의 거미줄,나니아 ,타임포키즈 ...잘도하는데 쓰는건 또 다른가봅니다
아이가 쓴 28개의 글 중에서 몇 개 골라봤습니다
고수님들! 어설픈 글이지만 한번 읽어보시고 꼭 짚고 넘어가야 할 부분 조언해주세요
#1
If I go to the time of Dinosaurs....
Frist, I want to meet triceratops that my favorite dinosaurs.
I want to see triceratops' huge horns.
And I want to ride a triceratops' back, feel its skin.
But I am scared of T-Rax.
So, I will walk the hill or ground carefully.
If I face with T-Rax, I will go to front of T-Rax and stick out my tongue.
And I will run to the place where duck-bill dinosaurs.
Because, if T-Rax see them, he will want to eat them.
Instead of me.
I will very sorry to duck-bill dinosaurs.
But I have to survive in this trip.
Dinosaurs are ancient creature, but I am real person.
That time, in a flash, I run to the magic tree house, and go back home.
I will invite my dad to have a travel in amazing,special,magic tree house.
Because I'm very scared, if I'm alone.
So dad will help me, when I'm in trouble.
We will have really fun.
#6
Save the Amazon rain forest
Today, all rain forests are too broken.
But before, rain forests are pradises and homes to many animals.
I heard about Amazon, the one of rain forests in the world.
Pink river dolphin(Boto), sea turtle and many other animals are endanger spieces that live in the Amazon.
Also Amazon rain forest's trees cut down by many people.
Papers and furnitures are made of trees.
So I think we have to use paper savingly.
I think trees are treasures.
Frist, if there is no trees, we won't have fresh air.
Second, the animals that live on trees will disappear.
Third, we will die if the flood come.
Because trees protect the land from the flood.
I want people in whole world don't cut down trees.
#8
When Jack and Annie leave the message on the flag, I was very funny.
I couldn't stop laughing.
They wrote they came to the moon for all children.
But in fact, they came to help Morgan.
I think Jack and Annie were lucky to visit the moon.
I want to go to the moon.
I want to see beautiful scene of the earth in there.
But the other side of my mind, I don't.
Moon is too gray and lonely.
So I want to make a green city on the moon.
I named this city "Korea Star"
#16
It's not fair!
How could only men join the Olympics Game?
I think even women have to join the Olympics .
Because women are important people,too.
Women have children.
So, they add the people to population of nations can grow.
And if women don't go outside or school, women will be bore.
And don't know how to read and write.
But luckly, today women all over the world (include the Greece) can act with men.
I'm so lucky to not born in the ancient Greece.
#21
Dear Lincoln
Hello! My name is Jin. I'm Korean.
I want that people in all the world didn't carry the African-Americans as the slaves.
African-Americans are people, too.
They just have black skin that different with ours.
When I read book about you, I thought you are the great person who love the all people so much.
I will love all the people just like you.
I promise!
I want you live happily in heaven.
Good day!
#23
If at first you don't succeed, try, try again.
I think this poem is very short, but strong and good.
Most of poems are about natures or love.
This poem remind me of this word. "I can do it!"
I had to skip rope in school.
But I didn't know how to do.
I skipped and jumped for a long time until I was knock down.
One day, finally, I could skip rope 20 times.
So I got praise from my teacher, mom and dad.
I was proud of myself.
And I practiced everyday to had more times than 20 times.
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