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Á¦¸ñÀº <The Crazy Land> ¶ø´Ï´Ù.

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I have a pretty doll.

This is my favorite.

 

So one day, I play with my doll.

 

Suddenley, the doll talk to me! But I think, "Something wrong to see it."

 

But, the doll said ,

"I am a girl and I'm not a just toy, I'm yours. And I'm your friend , my name is Mellody. and I'm from <Crazy Land>. and you?"

 

"I'm Candy and I'm your f...friend, too. And I love you and that is all about me."

-but, axully not-

 

I'm a little afraid of doll. Because the doll is talking to me! And what is the Crazy Land? And what is the talking toy? whatever....

And by the way, the doll said, "WoW! We have a name rhyme. It's a '-dy'. See Mellody! Candy! We are so good friends."

 

I think she (that is a doll but) is something good. The doll said "Will you go to Crazy Land?" she asked. So I'm going to the Crazy land. (I think) Crazy Land has funny jokes and good PC rooms.

But it is opposite to my think! But in Crazy Land, something crazy. But that's cool. So I played with Mellody. She is a good friend I ever seen. I went to eat the Icecream. But I didn't eat that, because the worm in it. But Mellody liked  that (I thought). And I went outside. It felt like grow and I grow and grow! I screamed...Ah-ah-ah~~~~~!

 

I woke up. Timebell is ringing. It's a dream? YES...

 

I have to go to school but... I think that was not a dream.

 

BECAUSE, I felt it was REAL!

 

                                                 -the end -

 

                                                                       written by Ashley S. Um

 

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