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안녕하세요.우리 아들이 영어책(매직트리하우스 19권)를 읽고 쓴 독후감인데요.
제가 실력이 모자라 첨삭을 해줄수가 없네요.영어 첨삭가능하신분은 읽고 조언 부탁드려요.
하니비님 또는 만재아빠님을 비롯한 실력자분들 꼭 좀 부탁드립니다.
참고로 저희 아이는 4학년이고 매직트리하우스를 1학년때부터 지금까지 반복해서 읽고 있습니다.
Tigers at Twilight
Jack and Annie walked past the frogcreek woods on their way home from the library.
They talked about Teddy.they said he is funy and wise.then Annie said his here.
Jack looked around and saw Teddy.Teedy ran.
they followed.Teddy stop at the oak tree.
they went up with Teddy.now they're going far away forest to get a gift.
Watch and eagle's feather was gift from last two adventures.
They found a reserch book.then they made a wish and went to far away forest.
The forest was noisey.At first, they met langur monkeys.
Annie named them Kah and Ko.Annie asked them that they know where the gift is.
Monkeys noded and went down the tree.they went down to.
They followed the monkeys. Then they saw a gash in a tree.
It means tiger.They went up tree like monkeys.Tiger came. They went up higer.
Then pythen came. It slidering up the tree. They swinged to other tree.
Tiger neary got them. Then they saw a elephant trunk.
They went down at the elephants back.they traveled on a elephants.
Then at night they heard sad sound. At morning, elephant was in the mud.
They went out with their shouseand socks of.then they wash off in the stream.
Suddenly horn came out of the mud.It was rhinoceros.It charged,but they stoped it with big noise.
Then they saw traped tiger in the forest. Tiger was endangered animal.
So they untraped them.Tiger growled at them.Jack and Annie hide.
But Teddy barked like a wild dog.Then tiger went away.
Jack and Annie came out and said. he is a wonder dog.
Then they met a blind hermit.Monkey sit with him.
Hermit said he listened saw much that all the voice of forest hear like one voice.
Hermit said please get some white flower on the stream.Annie take it to him.
He said beautiful white flower can't live with out dirty root.
It means, that when beautiful things need dirty thing to live.
Hermit give them a white folwer and it's root.It was gift from forest far away.
Jack worried about the tree house.He think they can't find the way to get back to magic tree house.
Then Hermit said their tree house is near.They look up,they can see the tree house.
Hermit said elephant walked in big circle.When they finish talking,Jack and Annie ran to tree house
and made a wish and went to frog creek woods.Jack asked to Teddy who is him realy.
Teddy tillted his head and he licked their hands.They went down the ladder and say good bye to Teddy.
Then they went their home.Their home's voice same.
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