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Korea has the great early-education fever. So, we could find the kindergarten child who is in the academy easily. But I'm not so happy about these trend.
For the first reason, children can get sick of studying early, so it gives a bad effect to middle and high school grades, and it has an effect in going university. Finally, it changes the child's whole life. Actually, I think we should educate kindergarten child an entertainment and physical education. This won't give a child a bad effect on studying. Besides, there's no time for studying entertainment and physical education in middle or high school. So we should educate kindergarten child an entertainment and physical education.
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So it has no means for the children that gets so many of academies. Besides, young children have no power of control the exhaustion of them, so it is very bad for he or she.
In conclusion, we could find the kindergarten child who is in the academy easily. But I'm not so happy about these trend. For the first reason, children can get sick of studying early, so it gives a bad effect to middle and high school grades, and it has an effect in going university.
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