Ãßõ 
¹Ì±¹Çб³¿¡¼­ ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¾²±â´Â ¾î¶»°Ô °¡¸£Ä¡´Â°¡¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ´äº¯

±Û¾´ÀÌ ÁÒÀ̾¾

µî·ÏÀÏ 2008-09-13 06:40

Á¶È¸¼ö 2,583

´ñ±Û 1

http://www.suksuk.co.kr/momboard/BEC_001/34982

īī¿ÀÅå īī¿À½ºÅ丮 ºí·Î±× ³×À̹ö¹êµå ÆäÀ̽ººÏ Æ®À§ÅÍ
¾¦¾¦´åÄÄ - ÆÄÀÏ ´Ù¿î·Îµå

ÆÄÀÏÀ» ´Ù¿î·Îµå ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

´ñ±Û ³²±â±â

¹Ì±¹Çб³¿¡¼­ ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¾²±â´Â ¾î¶»°Ô °¡¸£Ä¡´Â°¡¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ´äº¯

 

Áö³­¹ø ¹Ì±¹¿¡¼­ ½Ã¾²±âÀÇ ¿¹¸¦ ¿Ã¸° ÈÄ ¹Ì±¹¿¡¼­ ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¾²±â¸¦ ¾î¶»°Ô ¹è¿ì´Â Áö ±Ã±ÝÇØ ÇÏ´Â ºÐµéÀÌ À־ ±×¿¡´ëÇÑ ±ÛÀ» ¿Ã¸³´Ï´Ù.

 

ÁßÇб³ 6ÇгâÀÎ µþ¿¡°Ô ¹Ì±¹ Çб³¿¡¼­ ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¾²±â¸¦ ¾î¶»°Ô °¡¸£Ä¡´ÂÁö¹°¾î º¸¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù. µþ¾ÆÀÌÀÇ ´ë´äÀº ÀÌ·¯ÇÏ¿´½À´Ï´Ù. (¹Ì±¹¿¡¼­´Â 6ÇгâÀº ÁßÇлý¿¡ ÇØ´çµË´Ï´Ù.)

 

¡°The teachers tell the students the guidelines of writing an essay. They show the students how an essay is supposed to look. The students pick an idea and write an essay on it.The teachers guide the students through the process. They show the students to edit the essay. The students meet with other students and discuss the essays and help each other. This takes couple of weeks. And everybody has finished essay. ¡°

±×·³ ¾î¶² °¡À̵å¶óÀÎÀÌ ÁÖ¾îÁö´Â³Ä´Â ÀúÀÇ Áú¹®¿¡,

¡°The guidelines are what are supposed to be in the essay. For example, an essay has a main idea and three supporting ideas. The essay is five paragraphs, and so on.¡±

 

±×¸®°í À̸»À» µ¡ºÙ¿´½À´Ï´Ù.

¡°The students write the essays only in class so the teachers can look at them and tell the students right away after they made mistakes. The teachers discussed the essays with the students. And then the students go home, type them up. The teachers really help the students.¡±

 

Âü°í·Î ÀúÀÇ °æ¿ì´Â ÃâÆÇ»ç REA¿¡¼­ ESL(English as a Second Language)¿ëÀ¸·Î Æì³½ ¡°Writing Intermediate & Advanced¡±À» º¸¾Ò´Âµ¥ ³»¿ëÀ̾ÆÁÖ ÁÁ¾Æ¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¾²±â ¿¬½ÀÇϴµ¥ µµ¿òÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ µÇ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. ¹°·Ð ÀÌ Ã¥Àº ¾î¸°À̺¸´Ù´Â ¾î¸¥À» À§Çؼ­ ¸¸µé¾îÁø Ã¥ÀÔ´Ï´Ù¸¸. Á¦ µþÀÇ ¸»À» µé¾îº¸´Ï ÀÌ Ã¥¿¡ÀÖ´Â ³»¿ëÀÌ ÀúÈñ µþ¾Ö°¡ Çб³¿¡¼­ ¹è¿î ±× °¡À̵å¶óÀÎÀ» ±×´ë·Î µû¶ó °¡´Â °Í °°½À´Ï´Ù.

 

Áñ°Å¿î ÇÏ·ç µÇ¼¼¿ä.

 

Joy 


¸¶ÀÌ ÆäÀÌÁö > ½ºÅ©·¦ºÏ¿¡¼­ È®ÀÎÇÏ½Ç ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù. ¼ÒÁßÇÑ ±Û¿¡ °¨»ç ´ñ±Û ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.

0
  Ãßõ      
·Î±×ÀÎ ÈÄ µ¡±ÛÀ» ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä
ÀÚ¼Ò¿ù 2008-09-13 11:36 

¿ì¸®³ª¶óµµ ÀÌ·¸°Ô ±ÛÀ» ¾²¸é ¼±»ý´ÔÀÌ ´Ù comment¸¦ ´Þ¾ÆÁØ´Ù¸é ¾ó¸¶³ª ÁÁÀ»±î »ý°¢ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

ÇÔ²² °íÄ¡°í ½á °¡´Â °úÁ¤¿¡¼­ ´Ù¸¥ »ç¶÷ÀÇ »ý°¢µµ µé¾îº¸°í ¸¹ÀÌ ´À³¥ ¼ö ÀÖÀ» ÅÙµ¥...

°¡²ûÀº ±×·± ȯ°æÀÇ ´Ù¸¥ ³ª¶ó ºÎ·¯¿ï ¶§µµ ÀÖ´ä´Ï´Ù. ^^


¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸ Ãßõ
20833

 ¾ÆÀÌµé ¸®µùÇÒ¶§¿©...Á¤¸»Á¤¸»..±Ã±ÝÇØ¿©..

[5]
¾È³ç¸¾ 2008/09/13 2,688 0
20832

 ¹Ì±¹Çб³¿¡¼­ ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ¾²±â´Â ¾î¶»°Ô °¡¸£Ä¡´Â°¡¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ´ä..

[1]
ÁÒÀ̾¾ 2008/09/13 2,583 0
20831

 ±×¸²»çÀüÀ» »ç·Á°í Çϴµ¥¿ä

[3]
µÎ¾Æ¸¾ 2008/09/13 1,943 0
20830

 ¸Æ±×·ÎÈú spotlight EFL Áú¹® Á» µå¸±²²¿ä.

[2]
µÎ¾Æ¸¾ 2008/09/13 1,648 0
20829

 ½¦µµ¿ì ½ºÇÇÅ·

[1]
Çö´ì 2008/09/12 2,412 0
20828

 ¾ö¸¶Ç¥¿Í º´ÇàÇϼöÀÖ´Â ÇнÀÁö¿ä~ ´«³ôÀÌ?À±¼±»ý?

[3]  ´ä±Û 1°³ ¡å
¿õÀ̸¾ 2008/09/12 3,531 0
20827

 ¿ùµåÄÄ ¸íÀÛ ÁÖÀýÁÖÀý.

[8]
¶óÄɽýº.. 2008/09/12 4,083 0
20826

 Ã©ÅÍºÏ °øºÎÇÒ¶§ ¸ð¸£´Â ´Ü¾î´Â?

[5]
µÎ¾ÆÀ̸¾.. 2008/09/12 2,654 0
20825

 ¹Ì»þ - ¾ö¸¶Ç¥·Î IET Áö¿ª´ë»óÀ» ¹Þ´Ù.

[31]
roche 2008/09/12 4,458 1
20824

 ¿ø¾î¹Î ¼ö¾÷À» ¹Þ°í Àִµ¥¿ä...

[1]  ´ä±Û 1°³ ¡å
¾Æ¸¸´Ù¸¾.. 2008/09/12 2,554 0
20823

 À¯¼± or ½ºÄ«À̶óÀÌÇÁ?

[7]
³ªºñ¾ß 2008/09/12 2,112 0
20822

 ¾Æ¹Ù ³ë·¡ °¡»ç´Â ¾îµð°¡¸é º¼ ¼ö ÀÖÀ»±î¿ä^^?

[6]  ´ä±Û 1°³ ¡å
ÇÞ»ì¾ö¸¶.. 2008/09/12 3,249 0
20821

 Àç¹ÌÀÖ°í½¬¿îÃ¥ºÎŹ

[1]
º»±Ù¸¾ 2008/09/12 1,520 0
20820

 ¾îÇбâ..¸¦...

[2]  ´ä±Û 2°³ ¡å
ÇöÀ̸¾¿¬.. 2008/09/12 2,295 0
20819

 Áê´Ïºñ CD....

[1]
¾î¸°¸¾ 2008/09/12 1,762 0
20818

 Ãʵ ¿ø¾î¹Î¿¡°Ô ¹è¿öµµ ¹ßÀ½ ÁÁ¾ÆÁö³ª¿ä??

[4]
ÇÔ¹Ú´« 2008/09/12 2,536 0
20817

 °ø±¸ÁßÀÎ Klassical Kids - °¨µ¿ÀÌ ³²´Ù¸¥ Ŭ·¡½ÄÀÔ´Ï´Ù^^..

[33]
Àº¼­»ç¶û.. 2008/09/12 4,352 6
20816

 ¾ö¸¶Ç¥ 1³â ¹Ý° -ÇöÀç »óȲ Á¡°Ë ºÎʵå·Á¿ä^^(¹«ÇùθÁ)..

[7]
µÕÀ̾ö¸¶.. 2008/09/11 3,463 0
20815

 ½ºÇʹö±×¿¡°Ô ÆíÁö º¸³¾ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¹æ¹ýÀ» Á»

[7]
º¸Åë¾ö¸¶.. 2008/09/11 1,562 0
20814

 Áê´Ïºñ Àߺ¸´Â ¾ÆÀÌ..Ã¥ ÃßõºÎʵ右´Ï´Ù

[15]
ºÎʏ¾ 2008/09/11 2,471 0