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JustinÀÇ journal:
Today the government said it will tear down old houses to build new buildings. So the people demonstrated to not make the government tear down their houses.
When the police squad went there, the demonstrators threw firing bottles. Six people burned to death.
It was a big accident.
Maybe the people were very angry and sad.
I think this accident's cause was the government.
When I be a president, I will not make the poor people demonstrate.
This accident happened many times. I think today's accident was very dangerous. I want this accident never happen again.
AndrewÀÇ journal:
Yesterday, demonstrators demonstrated against police squads. But the demonstration was stopped by 8:00 AM. Six people died, and some police squad were included in there.
The government decided to tear down old houses, so the demonstrators demonstrated against the government. I saw some words in red on placards.
There were many demonstration about things about their houses. Many people died or hurt.
When I heard this news from the newspaper, I kept remembering about candlelight demonstration. It was about sick cows. It was a kind of war. War between polices and demonstrators.
I hope there is no demonstrations about this. I think there were two big wars in 2008 and 2009.

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