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<Scary story>
There was a boy named David,
One day, he got lost in the woods,
and he found a haunted house.
He went to inside.
He heard a rustling noise!
He stopped and the noise stopped too.
He moved again....
He heard the noise again!
He stopped again.
He knew the sound was his footsteps,
so he wasn't afraid.
He went into the room.
He saw a skeleton!
He was afraid that he was ready to run away,
but the door wouldn't open.
So he yelled "Let me out!"
He stomped his feet.
Suddenly, the door opend and
David flew across the room
and fell right into the skeleton.
He jumped up and ran out of haunted house.
Outside the house,
there was a graveyard.
David saw a head...
but it wasn't attatched to a neck!
A body with no head held it in it's hand.
It was a ghost.
David shot his gun at the ghost.
The ghost's skin fell all over the ground.
Then... there was nothing.
David ran all through the forest.
Suddenly, the ground came up like a slide,
and he slid all the way back to the haunted house.
David looked at the house
and saw the lights go on in two windows.
The door opend.
Wooden spikes came out of the ground.
The carpet came out of the door like a tongue.
The haunted house was a monster!
David ran. The carpet tongue tried to catch him!
Suddenly the tongue stopped
because it couldn't go any farther.
David ran across the woods...
but suddenly the trees moved!
A tree caught David.
The tree gave David to another tree.
That tree handed him to another.
They took him all the way back to the monster house.
The last tree threw David into the house!
Suddenly the monster house became quiet.
It was a regular haunted house again.
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