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Title: My Friend Kitty

Hello, I am ¤·¤·¤· 4th grade 2nd class. I will do a presentation on a cat that I love. First of all, the reason why I love cats is because unlike my first thought that they will be scary, they are lovely and since there are many who have cats around me I was able to become more friendly with cats. When cats are happy they raises their tail and gives a gentle wave in the air. On the other hand, when they are mad their fur stiffens and their tip of their ears are pointed backwards. Their eyes widen and teeth are shown. When cats meet with each other they greet by raising their tail straight up. When I see cats on the streets, even though they may have freedom, I feel sorry for them because they are exposed to diseases and danger. I also feel bad for house cats too because although they have a place to sleep and eat but do not have freedom. In the end, only cats will know which is better.

 

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