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Most of the kids like to play video(computer)games more than 1hour a day. However, I think playing too much video(computer)games are not good for us. Now, I will give you 3 reasons why I think it is bad for us.
The first reason why I think video(computer)games are not good is because it is sometimes violent. My brother likes to play a game called 'League of Legend'. I was watching the game, and it was very violent. The team had to kill the other team. Also, there was a space that we canchat with each other. The other team doesn't know who else is playing, so they just write bad words to others.I think because of that game, my brother is more violent and uses more bad words.
The second reason is because it is not healthy to our health. Video(computer)games are very fun, so we would like to do it for a long time. when we just sit on a chair, doing games, our neck, waist, and legs don't have to use power. So, we can get weak. Also, if we spend the night to do computer games, we can't sleep and the next day, our body has less energy and tired, we can't do our work propely.
The last reason is because we can get addicted to games. Last year, a boy was addicted to computer games and he killed hid brother. Then, he said"I killed him but there is no item."Like this, if we get addicted to games, we can get crazy and believe the bad information in games are true.
Of course games are fun, but I think playing too much games are not good.