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My Dream

Dec 15, 2014

Park, _____________

4th Grade, __________ Elementary

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Hello, As you know, I'm going to tell you 3 things about me.

First of all, I'm going to talk about my role model.

My role model is Ban, Ki Moon, UN Secretary General.

He is a very proud man of Korea.

My dream is to be a diplomat and he is a great diplomat.

That means I have lots of things to copy him and learn from him.

The reason that he is my role model is because I want to shine on a global stage like him.

 

Next, I'm going to tell you about the happiest moment of my life.

Well I don't have one yet. 'Cause every moment of my life is equally precious to me.

Every day and every night I could be the one and only special me.

I hope you all think about the real meaning of our life.

 

And finally it's time to talk about what I want to do in the future.

I also think this question has lots of answers as well.

I always think about foolish war and greed to get money and to step on each other. Even when we are brothers.

I don't know how discrimination and border have been made.

What if we just think that the world is just one country?

I say the universe is wide but this earth is small.

If we have so much foolishness in this small earth, how do we stand in the universe?

I want to bring peace to this world. What do you think?

Ok. this is my speech.

Thank you for listening even though it's hard to bear.

 

 

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