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My Dream
Dec 15, 2014
Park, _____________
4th Grade, __________ Elementary
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Hello, As you know, I'm going to tell you 3 things about me.
First of all, I'm going to talk about my role model.
My role model is Ban, Ki Moon, UN Secretary General.
He is a very proud man of Korea.
My dream is to be a diplomat and he is a great diplomat.
That means I have lots of things to copy him and learn from him.
The reason that he is my role model is because I want to shine on a global stage like him.
Next, I'm going to tell you about the happiest moment of my life.
Well I don't have one yet. 'Cause every moment of my life is equally precious to me.
Every day and every night I could be the one and only special me.
I hope you all think about the real meaning of our life.
And finally it's time to talk about what I want to do in the future.
I also think this question has lots of answers as well.
I always think about foolish war and greed to get money and to step on each other. Even when we are brothers.
I don't know how discrimination and border have been made.
What if we just think that the world is just one country?
I say the universe is wide but this earth is small.
If we have so much foolishness in this small earth, how do we stand in the universe?
I want to bring peace to this world. What do you think?
Ok. this is my speech.
Thank you for listening even though it's hard to bear.
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