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[영어일기]매직 트리 하우스 독후감

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매직트리를 읽고난 후 아이가 쓴 글이예요

일기가 아니라  올릴까 말까 망설였지만...

히플러님께서 한번 봐주신다면 제가 아이 지도하는데 큰 도움이 될것같습니다

#1

If I go to the time of Dinosaurs....

Frist, I want to meet triceratops that my favorite dinosaurs.

I want to see triceratops' huge horns.

And I want to ride a triceratops' back, feel its skin.

But I am scared of T-Rax.

So, I will walk the hill or ground carefully.

If I face with T-Rax, I will go to front of T-Rax and stick out my tongue.

And I will run to the place where duck-bill dinosaurs.

Because, if T-Rax see them, he will want to eat them.

Instead of me.

I will very sorry to duck-bill dinosaurs.

But I have to survive in this trip.

Dinosaurs are ancient creature, but I am real person.

That time, in a flash, I run to the magic tree house, and go back home.

I will invite my dad to have a travel in amazing,special,magic tree house.

Because I'm very scared, if I'm alone.

So dad will help me, when I'm in trouble.

We will have really fun.



#6

Save the Amazon rain forest

Today, all rain forests are too broken.

But before, rain forests are pradises and homes to many animals.

I heard about Amazon, the one of rain forests in the world.

Pink river dolphin(Boto), sea turtle and many other animals are endanger spieces that live in the Amazon.

Also Amazon rain forest's trees cut down by many people.

Papers and furnitures are made of trees.

So I think we have to use paper savingly.

I think trees are treasures.

Frist, if there is no trees, we won't have fresh air.

Second, the animals that live on trees will disappear.

Third, we will die if the flood come.

Because trees protect the land from the flood.

I want people in whole world don't cut down trees.


#8

When Jack and Annie leave the message on the flag, I was very funny.

I couldn't stop laughing.

They wrote they came to the moon for all children.

But in fact, they came to help Morgan.

I think Jack and Annie were lucky to visit the moon.

I want to go to the moon.

I want to see beautiful scene of the earth in there.

But the other side of my mind, I don't.

Moon is too gray and lonely.

So I want to make a green city on the moon.

I named this city "Korea Star"

#16

It's not fair!

How could only men join the Olympics Game?

I think even women have to join the Olympics .

Because women are important people,too.

Women have children.

So, they add the people to population of nations can grow.

And if women don't go outside or school, women will be bore.

And don't know how to read and write.

But luckly, today women all over the world (include the Greece) can act with men.

I'm so lucky to not born in the ancient Greece.

#21

Dear Lincoln

Hello! My name is Jin.  I'm Korean.

I want that people in all the world didn't carry the African-Americans as the slaves.

African-Americans are people, too.

They just have black skin that different with ours.

When I read book about you, I thought you are the great person who love the all people so much.

I will love all the people just like you.

I promise!

I want you live happily in heaven.

Good day! 


#23

If at first you don't succeed, try, try again.

I think this poem is very short, but strong and good.

Most of poems are about natures or love.

This poem remind me of this word. "I can do it!"

I had to skip rope in school.

But I didn't know how to do.

I skipped and jumped for a long time until I was knock down.

One day, finally, I could skip rope 20 times.

So I got praise from my teacher, mom and dad.

I was proud of myself.

And I practiced everyday to had more times than 20 times.


마이 페이지 > 스크랩북에서 확인하실 수 있습니다. 소중한 글에 감사 댓글 남겨주세요.

        
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설단비 2007-02-03 05:42 

늘 감탄 할 뿐입니다. 엄마표로 이 정도 갈 수 있게 support 하는 지니맘의 노력을 높히 사고 싶습니다. 요즘 늪에 빠져서 마냥 손을 놓고 있다 보니 아주 쉬운 단어도 많이 생각을 못 하네요. 즐겨주면서 아이의 손을 다시금 잡아 주어야 겠네요. 지니의 글을 보니 반가워 몇 자 올립니다.

히플러 2007-01-29 11:36 

오우, 초등게시판에서 보고 감탄했드랬습니다.

안그래도 몇가지 수정해드리고 싶은 문장이 있어 말씀드릴까 하다

밀린 일기가 많아 차마 말씀못드리고 있었는데, 반갑습니다.^^

앞의 것부터 차례대로 하고 다시 돌아올게요.

오래 걸리더라도 기다려주세요. 최선을 다하고 있습니다..헥헥.


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