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11. taekwondo 12. is 13. korea person 14. contrivance 15. boastful
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I took up Taekwondo lessons as a young girl and it was a very cool experience. I was fit and disciplined. This sport is famous all over the world, and there certainly is a lot that you can say about it. Add more details to your essay. Make sure that you organize your ideas, and that there is an introduction, body, adn conclusion. The intro must contain an overview of your essay. The body, on the other hand, must contain your ideas' supporting statements. Keep your sentences simple and straightforward. You could make it more interesting by using deive words and specific examples. Observe proper subject-verb agreement and consistency in the tenses. Afterwards, read through the whole thing and correct remaining errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization. Good luck!