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Let's talk about the relationship of your friends.
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I have many friends and I have many 1. enemy.
I have two best friends.
My best 2. friends name 3. is 4. ±èº´Çö and ¾È¼¼ÈÆ.
They are very kind 5. of me and I 6. kind 7. of 8. them 9. to.
They 10. are in 11. U.S.A. 12. in two 13. year.So they like American 14. game
15. But I'am korean.So I like 16. korean 17. game.
18. In this point we are not 19. congenial.
But we 20. become known 21. three musketeers in school.
22. And I have 23. very bad friend. He 24. is open annoying me.
Once, I fight with 25. he. Win is mine.
26. My good friend is very kind 27. of all.
Once, my leg 28. is 29. brocken, 30. he 31. help me 32. every day
33. But my bad 34. friend 35. with comparison, 36. He is scoundrel.
37. And my academy 38. freind 39. is hit me every day.
It is very 40. pain. 41. But I like 41. them.
I think 42. I'am strange. 43. My enemy is they, but I like 44. them
45. "My friends are listen! don't hit me and don't make fun of me! "
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Spelling/öÀÚ 29. brocken, : broken Note: Remove th comma. 38. freind : friend | ||
Grammar_Articles(the, a or an)/°ü»ç 11. U.S.A. : the U.S.A. 23. very : a very | ||
Grammar_Prepositions(on, at, from, by, to.....)/ÀüÄ¡»ç 5. of : to 7. of : to 12. in : for 18. In : At 35. with : in | ||
Grammar_Conjunction(and, but)/Á¢¼Ó»ç 22. And I : I 30. he : and he 33. But my : My | ||
Grammar_Capitalization/´ë¼Ò¹®ÀÚ 16. korean : Korean 41. But : but | ||
Grammar_Conjugation/µ¿»çº¯ÈÈ°¿ë 3. is : are 10. are : have been 20. become : became 24. is open annoying : openly annoys 28. is : was 31. help : helped 39. is hit : hits | ||
Grammar_Punctuation/ºÎÈ£»ç¿ë 8. them : them, 32. every day : every day. 34. friend : friend, 42. I'am : I am 44. them : them. | ||
Essay Format_Sentence Structure/¹®ÀåÀÇ ±¸¼º 2. friends name : friends 4. ±èº´Çö and ¾È¼¼ÈÆ : Kim Byeong Hyeon and An Se Hoon 6. kind : am kind 13. year.So : years, so 15. But I'am korean.So : I am Korean, however, so 21. three : as the three 25. he. Win is mine : him and I won 26. My : On the other hand, my 27. of all : all the time 36. He is : is a 43. My enemy is they : They are my enemies 45. "My friends are listen! don't hit me and don't make fun of me! " : I want to tell my friends to listen to me and not make fun of me! | ||
Essay Format_inappropriate Words/´Ü¾î»ç¿ë ÀûÀý¼º 1. enemy : enemies 9. to : too 14. game : games. 17. game : games 19. congenial : so close as before 37. And : In addition 40. pain. : painful, Note: Change the punctuation. 41. them : my friends |
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I hope you and your friends could form the three musketeers again. And it's pretty positive of you to still like people who tease you. Your friends must be fond of you that's why they kid around you. Don't worry, things change when you grow up. You will see then how much friendship you've made. I have a feeling you don't have a hard time making friends. :)
The article was clear enough to understand. Basic writing rules were observed although you can be more precise with the spelling and punctuation. Take note that when you use an apostrophe ('), you're making words shorter and in the process you lose some letters. We either write "I am" or "I'm" then. Kindly write all words in the English alphabet so that the reader can fully appreciate what you've written. Always check your verbs because sometimes the verbs are not in the proper tense. Remember that if you're describing finished action, you use the past tense, but if you're giving general statements, you use the p