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Here is your first assignment for our new book series.
I had fun reading this short and exciting book 
because I've only been reading thick and boring books lately.

I want you to write well thought out answers provided on the sheet.
Looking forward to reading your work.
Hope you have fun with this assignment!

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I.                  

First, Edgar Degas was born in Paris, France, on July 19, 1834.

 

Vocabulary

Find some words you didn¡¯t know as you read the book. Write a simple sentence using each word. Pick at least 2 words from each chapter.

 

royal

Arthur has royal blood.

unless

Unless I was study very hard, I could be good at the test.

adopt

My family adopted a cute baby.

orphanage

The servant sent the baby to the orphanage.

mutter

He muttered when I finished my story.

rub

I rubbed my phone.

dungeon

He will throw you in a dungeon.

swirl

Tornado swirled, so I felt afraid.

allowance

I received 10000 won for allowance.

rush

I have to rush!

former

This is my former teacher.

logical

You need a logical answer.

pack

This is very pack.

nasty

My friend is nasty.

unsure

I am unsure to P.E.

duchess

I saw a duchess. She was very beautiful!

unwrap

I unwrapped the ribbon.

proof

This is the proof.

 

 

 

 

II.                Reading Comprehension

Answer the following questions below.

 

1.      What did you think would have happened when you first saw the cover of Marvin Redpost 1: Kidnapped at Birth? Did you guess correctly when you finished the book?

 

No, I didn¡¯t. I thought, ¡®This main character will be baby. The character will kidnap at his (her) birth.¡¯. But it wasn¡¯t! Marvin isn¡¯t baby and he wasn¡¯t kidnapped at his birth. However, he thinks he was kidnapped at birth.

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2.      How did Marvin feel from hearing King Shampoon¡¯s search for his lost son? What made Marvin think that way?

 

Marvin thinks he will be Prince Robert. Because, when Marvin says he was kidnapped at birth to his friends. His friends say, he will be the lost son of the King Shampoon. So he begins to think he is Prince Robert. 

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3.      Why did Lady Jennifer like Marvin more than any other boy who called about being the lost son of King Shampoon?

 

It is because Lady Jennifer was nice talking with Marvin. She would feel happy and ***** when she talked with Marvin. So she likes him and she wants Marvin is the lost son of King Shampoon.

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4.      When Marvin was about to leave home to go the Waterside Hotel for a blood test, how did his parents react? Do you think his parents were upset?

 

Yes. I think Marvin¡¯s parent feel upset. But they would believe Marvin is their son. They know the answer. However they would feel upset very little. And they want to Marvin come back to Marvin¡¯s house.

 

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5.      Even though Marvin found out his blood type was O negative, he suddenly thought that he was no longer the lost son of King Shampoon. Why did he think this way?

 

It is because he has red hair and blue eyes. And if the blood type is O negative, a one person in the receive O negative, he is the lost son of King Shampoon.

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III.             Free Response Question

 

Sometimes I¡¯ve felt that my parents were not my actual parents. Have you ever felt that way? Write when and why. This answer should be at least 9 sentences long.

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I had the feeling. When I was young, I felt my parents were not my actual parents. It is because my parents felt angry at me. Before they felt angry, I have a test. The test¡¯s result was bad. But I think I study very hard but they would not think same me. So they yelled at me. That time, I felt sad and they are not my parents. And I felt angry, too. However, I know my parents are my actual parents. I love their!

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ä¿ø very good work! Your english is very clear and easy to understand. My parents yelled at me for bad test results too. Make sure to post quicker next time!
Keep up the good work!
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I can see the anger inside you. Good job on showing your anger well. However, tt's cool to be angry at your mom but let's not use the word "hate."
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-11 19:30:35
Good job but you forgot to answer the free response question...
It's cool but be sure to do everything, buddy.
Keep up the hard work!
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I.                  

First, Edgar Degas was born in Paris, France, on July 19, 1834.

 

Vocabulary

Find some words you didn¡¯t know as you read the book. Write a simple sentence using each word. Pick at least 2 words from each chapter.

 

current

A fan supplies a current of fresh air.

cursive

I can write English with cursive.

at birth

I was one years old at birth.

royal

The king and queen of shampoo are royal blood.

odds

The odds are one in a billion to win a lotto.

examine

I¡¯ll examine how the parrot talks.

adopted

She was adopted at the orphanage.

spiting image

He¡¯s the spiting image with his dad.

unless

You have not pushed the yellow button on less you are a fool.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

II.                Reading Comprehension

Answer the following questions below.

 

1.      What did you think would have happened when you first saw the cover of Marvin Redpost 1: Kidnapped at Birth? Did you guess correctly when you finished the book?

 

 

No. when I saw the cover of the book, I thought a boy with a red hair is a sort of little

king.

 

 

2.      How did Marvin feel from hearing King Shampoon¡¯s search for his lost son? What made Marvin think that way?

 

He thinks he¡¯s prince Robert. Because he has red hairs and blue eyes. But other familes have brown eyes and brown hairs.

     

 

3.      Why did Lady Jennifer like Marvin more than any other boy who called about being the lost son of King Shampoon?

 

Because he says ¡®thank you¡¯ every time when he talks to her.

 

4.      When Marvin was about to leave home to go the Waterside Hotel for a blood test, how did his parents react? Do you think his parents were upset?

 

He went to 4:30. Mrs. Red post agreed to take him to the blood test.

 

5.      Even though Marvin found out his blood type was O negative, he suddenly thought that he was no longer the lost son of King Shampoon. Why did he think this way?

 

Because the king of shampoo talks like a weird accent.

 

III.             Free Response Question

 

Sometimes I¡¯ve felt that my parents were not my actual parents. Have you ever felt that way? Write when and why. This answer should be at least 9 sentences long.

 

I didn¡¯t thought about, my parents are really not my parents. Because I did punished many times. But I didn¡¯t never ever thought they are not my parents.

Well, I did hate them many times. Even I want to go out from my home.

 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-11 19:29:17
I appreciate the typing very much. Good job for the first assignment.
Keep up the good work!
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-11 19:27:29
Whoa man! Orphanage and Murder? Even if your parents weren't real, they probably wouldn't do that to you. But I like the creativity. Good job!
Jenn 2011-07-10 17:34 

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Jenn I love how you're so sure that you're parents are your true parents. Your de******ions about the proof of your parents birthgiving amused me. Good work!
sophie 2011-07-10 14:46 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-11 19:22:24
Sophie, this is a very creative thought that you had.
Your English is excellent for your age as well.
Good job!
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Great ÇÏÀ̵ð! That's ***** how you think your parents are not real when they tell on you.
Keep up the hard work!
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Good job. I'm sure you've thought at least once that your parents were not your actual parents.
Make sure you write longer next time. Keep up the good work!
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Hey ÁÖ¿ï, I like how you actually tried to use superpowers after reading a book.
Good job. Keep up the good work!
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ÈÖÀ±, I heard you're a very good dancer and a good writer.
I wonder what it's like to have two other siblings.
Keep up the hard work!
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I don't like when my parents scold me either.
Keep up the hard work
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-08 23:45:03
Hey good job ½º¸¶ÀÏ°É. I hard you are a very hard worker.
Keep up the good work!
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literacy 2011-07-05 07:51 

¹Ì¼Ç ¼öÇàÀÚ: Veronica Çѱ¹³ªÀÌ 10»ìÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-08 23:42:37
Hey Veronica, this is really good.
I've once tried to take off my mom's mask too.
Didn't work so well.
Keep up the hard work!
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2011-07-09 11:23:45
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-08 23:36:45
Hey Hera, I heard that you're in America.
Don't American schools make you write a lot?
If you keep working on these assignments, I'm sure you can do well in school!
Keep up the hard work!
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2011-07-09 11:12:57
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literacy 2011-07-05 07:58:45
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Nate Mom 2011-07-05 20:59:27
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sophie 2011-07-07 09:21:55
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-08 23:34:00
Hey Áö¿ø, I think this is very good for a second grader on her first project.
Keep up the hard work.
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sophie 2011-07-07 09:27:46
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-08 23:32:28
Hey Nate, good job for the first project. I've heard that you are always first in posting your assignments on the mission °Ô½ÃÆÇ. You did it again. NICE.
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