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Hey guys, we are about to set off on another week. Yay!

Great job all of you on such wonderful work last week.

This is your third assignment on the Marvin Redpost series.

 

It's been raining so much lately hasn't it? Don't you want sunlight at last?

I certainly hope so. I hope you are safe from the pouring rain.

 

Hope you have fun.

Looking forward to reading your work!


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Jennyapple ÃÊ 5

Vocabulary Find some words you didn¡¯t know as you read the book. Write a simple sentence using each word. Pick at least 2 words from each chapter

 

Reading Comprehension
Answer the following questions below.



 

 


Free Response Question
 
Sometimes I imagine being a girl. What would it be like if you suddenly turned into a girl or a boy? List three things that you would like to do. Make sure you use ¡°If I were a boy/girl, I would like to ¡¦.¡±  Also, post a picture of you dressed up as a girl or a boy. It should be fun, right?

 

 

 

 


 

      

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ÃÊ3, Eric

 

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¥±. Reading Comprehension

1. What Happen if someone kisses their elbow?

A) If boy kisses their elbow They turned into a girl. If girl kisses theirs, they turned into boy.

 

2. Why sis Marvin's mother yell " Linzy" when Mavin yelled in his sleep?

A) Because his voice sounded like a girl's voice so, Marvin's mother guesses it was Linzy.

 

3. Most students at school didn't talk to Patsy Gatsby. Marvin got the courage to talk to her and to stand up for her as well. What did Marvin stand up for?

A) He dose not wanted to see he was sounded and like a girl. So he want to who don't know about this thing. so he went to Patsy Gatsby and be her partner.

 

4. marvin suddenly thought he understood the secret difference between girls and boys. What did you think the secret difference was?

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¥³. What would it be like if you suddenly turned into a girl? List three things that you would like to do.

If I were a girl, I would like to play with any friends. I am a girl. I would play with girls a lot.

If I were a girl, I would like not wear a dress because a hate dresses.

If I were a girl, I would like study hard. boys work a little and paly many as you want. girls cannot play so much. just a little. and they have to study as they want.

 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:35:23
Eric, I always wanted to play with girls a lot, too.
I appreciate you typing your answers once more. Thank you.
Good work and good improvement.
Keep up the good work!
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ÃÊ 5, Mickey

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:32:30
Mickey, I'm sure you've imagined at least once about being a girl.
It is impossible but I know you can imagine. Haha
Good work, and I see you improving as well.
Keep up the good work!
sophie 2011-07-25 21:09:14
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I.                  

Name _________________________  Grade: __________________

First, Edgar Degas was born in Paris, France, on July 19, 1834.

 

Vocabulary

Find some words you didn¡¯t know as you read the book. Write a simple sentence using each word. Pick at least 2 words from each chapter.

 

Separate

I will separate these crackers to two.

Allow

I allow you to go in my room.

Midair

I did a bungee jumping in a midair.

Con versation

I over heard a few snathes of conversation.

Pitcher

I was a pitcher of the game.

Jacks

The girls played jacks whild we are playing soccer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

II.                Reading Comprehension

Answer the following questions below.

 

1.      What happens if someone kisses their elbow?

 

They suddnly turns into a girl.

2.      Why did Marvin¡¯s mother yell ¡°Linzy¡± when Marvin yelled in his sleep?

 

Because his voise sounds like a girl and weird.

3.      Most students at school didn¡¯t talk to Patsy Gatsby. Marvin got the courage to talk to her and to stand up for her as well. What did Marvin stand up for?

 

Because he has a girl¡¯s feeling and knew her feelings very well.

4.      Marvin suddenly thought he understood the secret difference between girls and boys. What did you think the secret difference was?

 

 Girls likes to tease the boys and make them into trouble.

III.             Free Response Question

Sometimes I imagine being a girl. What would it be like if you suddenly turned into a girl or a boy? List three things that you would like to do. Make sure you use ¡°If I were a boy/girl, I would like to ¡¦.¡±  Also, post a picture of you dressed up as a girl or a boy. It should be fun, right?

 

 If I was a girl, first, I want to play hopscoth every time I wants. If I became a girl I will never ever wear any dresses or skirts. I will don¡¯t tie my hair to pony tails or piggy tails. Or even bangs. I will just only have long, straght hair. Expecaily, very long. About fifty centimeters long.

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:30:40
I've always wanted long hair, too.
Good work but can you make your answers a little longer though.
I see you improving as well.
Keep up the good work!
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:28:42
You want to fight and tease girls? I didn't know you wanted to tease girls and fight.
Good work though. Great improvement, too.
Well done
sophie 2011-07-24 21:19 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:26:39
Sophie, I think it would be creepy if I suddnely became a girl, too.
Great answers! They are descriptive and clear.
Great work. I see improvement every day from you.
Well done!
ä¿ø¸¾ 2011-07-24 20:09 

matter

The homework is very matter to me.

weirdo

She thinks the boy is weirdo.

admire

I admire my parents and my teacher.

somersault

I can¡¯t somersault but my father is good at doing somersault.

pitcher

Many people like the pitcher.

spit

Bill spits on his shoes.

cozy

I felt cozy on my bed.

cocoon

I hate caterpillars and cocoons.

gross

The food looks very gross.

cheek

The rich man hits his servant¡¯s cheek.

concentrate

I have to concentrate at the school.

stinky

Your hair is very stinky.

hum

My brother likes humming.

gather

We gather at the park.

embarrassing

I was so embarrassing when she calls me.

sharpen

I sharpen the sky blue pencil.

gently

She said very gently to me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I.                   Reading Comprehension

Answer the following questions below.

 

1.      What happens if someone kisses their elbow?

 

If a boy or a girl kisses their elbow, a boy will change into a girl and a girl will change into a boy.

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2.      Why did Marvin¡¯s mother yell ¡°Linzy¡± when Marvin yelled in his sleep?

 

It is because Marvin¡¯s sound liked a girl, so Marvin¡¯s mother thought Linzy had a nightmare. And she called ¡°Linzy¡±.

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3.      Most students at school didn¡¯t talk to Patsy Gatsby. Marvin got the courage to talk to her and to stand up for her as well. What did Marvin stand up for?

 

Clarence began teasing Patsy Gatsby. Travis and Kenny laughed. However Marvin thought Patsy is very good girl. So he wanted protect Patsy from Clarence.

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4.      Marvin suddenly thought he understood the secret difference between girls and boys. What did you think the secret difference was?

 

I am a girl so I think girls are better than boys. But I think I am not a boy or girl, I think girls can¡¯t understand boys and boys can¡¯t understand girls. They have very difference things so they can have good and bad.

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II.                Free Response Question

Sometimes I imagine being a girl. What would it be like if you suddenly turned into a girl or a boy? List three things that you would like to do. Make sure you use ¡°If I were a boy/girl, I would like to ¡¦.¡±  Also, post a picture of you dressed up as a girl or a boy. It should be fun, right?

 

 

If I was a boy¡¦

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First, I will do P.E. because boys are good at P.E. than girls. I¡¯m not well at P.E. but I was a

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boy, I will be well at P.E. than now. 

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Second, I want to talk with the other boys. Because boys¡¯ talking and girls¡¯ talking are very

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different. 

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Third, I want to game with another boys. Because boys¡¯ games look very *****. But I am a

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girl so if I play boys¡¯ game, the other friends think me who is weirdo.

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:25:17
Neat work, ä¿ø! I love how you always type.
I didn't know you liked sports. I love sports.
Good work and good improvement.
Well Done!
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Kevin, I don't want to go to the army either.
Bur it's the only way for us to fight for our own people and country
when the enemies threaten our lives.
Good answers and overall, good job!
I'm seeing good improvement from you.
Well done!
Grace¸¾ 2011-07-22 00:51 

 

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Grace, I didn't know you liked sports. I do too. I love playing soccer.
Good work and good improvement! Love the drawing, too.
Well done!
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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:15:53
Hera, you want to shave and be powerful? ***** I want to be powerful, too.
Word of caution, don't use the word "gay." It can hurt people's feelings.
Good work thought and good progress. Well done!
Jenn 2011-07-21 18:16 

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It's good to have both views on the good and bad parts of being a girl, À¯Áø.
Nicely done! I've seen some good improvement from you!
Good job!
literacy 2011-07-21 08:45 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:11:06
Cursive! Nice! I didn't expect an elementary school student to write in cursive.
Good job! Just try to make you responses longer though.
Good Work!
PS, next time try to get all the documents on to one post. Haha
literacy 2011-07-21 08:44 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:08:41
I love the free response ÈÖÀ±! It's very descriptive and creative.
I like how you want to be the perfect man if you ever become a boy.
I've noticed that you are improving every week! Great work!
Nate Mom 2011-07-19 20:14 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-07-25 16:05:40
Hey Á¶Àº, love the cute picture. You hate boys? Boys are the best. Haha
I love the creativity that you have observed about boys. I'm seeing good improvement too.
Well done!
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