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[12]GS #9 A Fabumouse Vacation for Geronimo

±Û¾´ÀÌ WFS Alex

µî·ÏÀÏ 2012-08-06 21:31

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Hi everyone!  It's great to see you all again!
How are you all? Have you been watching the Olympics?
I've gone to sleep after 1 o'clock every night since the Olympics began.
It doesn't seem like staying up late affects my daily cycle, though.

My favorite event was swimming because I swim in the school swim team

and hoped ¹ÚÅÂȯ to win gold medal.
Even though he didn't get one, I think he did really well and deserves praises.
The most surprising event was soccer! I've never even imagined that Korea would beat U.K.
Such a great accomplishment in Korea's soccer history!
But I was furious with the fencing game with Shin A Lam. Did you all watch the game?
I stayed up until 3:00 AM but I couldn't even get to sleep because of the stupid misjudgment.

 

Well, now....our Geronimo. How did you like the book? Did you all enjoy it?
I could understand how Geronimo might feel when he kept missing his priceless vacation

because I can't really enjoy my summer vacation, either because of SAT preparaton.
Hope you all are enjoying your vacation and not depressed as I am.
Our Geronimo series is almost done!


Get ready to say goodbye to Geronimo and to say hi to Freddy,

the main character of the series that we are going to begin in 2 weeks.

Enjoy the second-last Geronimo Stilton assignment and have a great week!!


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sophie 2012-08-14 21:27:09
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WFS Alex 2012-08-14 00:24:35
I can see that you did put much effort on this assgnment but there is a problem here. I can't read your work... If you can retake the picture it would be easier for me to read it..
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sophie 2012-08-14 21:23:24
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sophie 2012-08-13 08:32 

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WFS Alex 2012-08-14 00:14:53
Fantastic answers!!!
I can see you have put a lot of effort on this work!
As always your answers are excellent!
Was there a lot of people in Yeo Su Expo? I really wanted to go there but I was too busy to.
It was also impressive that you thought of a specific place that you want to have a vacation.
Thank you so much for helping me and I'm 200% sure that you will be a great leader!
Grace¸¾ 2012-08-12 23:29 

sophie 2012-08-13 10:52:32
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 23:47:48
Wow! Did you have a good day? Sounds like you had a lot of fun!
Overall, you did a good job.
But if you had explained a little bit more on the answer for the second reading comprehension question, your answers quality would have been much better.
Others are all well done so great job!
¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-12 21:56 

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sophie 2012-08-13 10:57:43
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 23:13:50
Great work! I also want to have a vacation at a small island where no one comes but my family. I appreciate that you answered correctly to the reading comprehension questions.
I can see that you've put a lot of effort on this assignment and keep it up!
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-08-12 20:02 

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¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-12 22:07:58
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sophie 2012-08-13 11:02:49
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 22:37:06
ÈÖÀ±! I always wait for your work because you were the only one who showed me your picture and helped me to remember you easily. I always thank you.
Your works also contribute a lot to help me remember you because you put much effort on each assignment. When I see your work, I can always know that your are enjoying bookclub very much. I appreciate that really much.
On the last answer, I can concur to you completely. It's too hot!!!
Also on the third answer for the third reading comprehension questions you catched the point of the question very well.
Wonderful work and I believe you will continue this great work.
Çý´Ï¸¾ 2012-08-12 18:48 

5Çгâ Çý´ÏÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-12 22:10:21
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sophie 2012-08-13 11:18:02
Çý´Ï´Â ÇÏ¿ÍÀ̸¦ °¡Àå ÀÌ»óÀûÀÎ ÈÞ°¡Áö¶ó°í »ý°¢Çϴ±º¿ä. ¾Æ¸§´Ù¿î dz°æ, ±ú²ýÇÑ ¹Ù´Ù µîµî ¸ðµç °Ô ´Ù °®ÃçÁø °÷ÀÌ°ÚÁö¿ä? ¿äÁò ¿ì¸®³ª¶ó ¹° ¶§¹®¿¡ Å« °ÆÁ¤Àε¥ ±ú²ýÇÑ ¹°ÀÌ ¾´ °É º¸°í Å©°Ô µ¿°¨ÇÕ´Ï´Ù. ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇß¾î¿ä.
WFS Alex 2012-08-13 22:27:57
Nicely done! I think both Jeju and Hawaii are really good places for a vacation.
Overall, I can see you've put a lot of effort on this assignment.
But there is a minor error. You mistakenly wrote "fist" for "first." This is very trivial but if you correct it, your answers will be more clear and easy to read.
Fantastic work!
anthropo 2012-08-12 17:42 

6Çгâ Ŭ·¹¾îÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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sophie 2012-08-13 11:25:51
RCW~~ ³×, ȯ»óÀûÀÎ °÷ÀÌ°Ú¾î¿ä. ³» »ç°ú³ª¹«µµ ÀÖ´Ù´Â ºÎºÐÀÌ ¾ÆÁÖ ÀλóÀûÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ^^ Ŭ·¹¾î´Â »õ·Î¿î À̸§Áþ±â¿¡µµ ÀçÁÖ°¡ ÀÖ´Â°Í °°½À´Ï´Ù. ¿­½ÉÈ÷ Àß »ý°¢Çß¾î¿ä.
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 22:16:02
Excellent work! And the fact that you are the only one who wrote about your worst vacation so far makes your answer unique. And I could totally agree with you because I had a similar experience. It was really impressive and creative that you said "A hospital tour." Nice work with great creativity.
Your imaginary place for vacation is very interesting too. I think everyone in this world would love to take a trip to "RCW."
Great quality. The best one so far. Keep this fantastic work and be careful not to get stomachache again!
ÃÊ·Ï»ç°ú 2012-08-12 10:10 

ÃÊ4 Lisa

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´Ù½ÃõõÈ÷ 2012-08-12 10:44:36
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sophie 2012-08-13 11:28:40
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 22:08:02
Wonderful! I also want to have a vacation at the sky land if it exists.
Your answers are a little bit short but since they contain enough information, it is alright.
But I'm sure that if you try to write more your answers will be very smooth and makes much more sense.
Good job and keep it up!
º¸¹°1È£ 2012-08-11 15:46 

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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 11:00:09
Wonderful work!
Your answers for reading comprehension questions are perfect and I also enjoyed your imaginary place and experience in France!
I've also been to France and I liked it really much. I didn't have a guide because it was ¹è³¶¿©Çà with my family. How good is snail? I 've never tried one. Does it taste like ¼Ò¶ó?
Anyways, great job on this work and keep this fantastic quality!
sophie 2012-08-13 12:08:10
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 10:52:50
Great job! Your answers for reading comprehension questions look very accurate and lengthy enough. Reading your answers, I also thought that North Pole will be a wonderful place for vacation.
I can see you've put a lot of effort and I appreciate that. Keep it up!
sophie 2012-08-13 12:13:56
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WFS Alex 2012-08-13 10:35:08
I've also had a vacation at Florida but in Disney World when I was 10. It was burning hot but I had a wonderful vacation there. I have some Harry Potter wands too. I bought them through internet. I have Harry, Dumbledore, and Voldemort's. I used to like Harry Potter a lot.
I can see you've put much effort on this assignment but if you work harder and write longer, I am pretty sure that the quality of your work will improve much. Good job and Keep up!
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