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[12]Geronimo Stilton #10

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µî·ÏÀÏ 2012-08-14 00:02

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Geronimo Stilton #10 - All Because of a Cup of Coffee.pdf (50.81KB)

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Greetings lads!
How has everyone been these two exciting weeks?
Number 5, that's Korea! We were fifth in the Olympics this year! Wow!
Korea is really athletic in sports! I mean Wow!
Soccer, too, was absolutely amazing. I wish I had been on that team so I could have been excused from military service. Hehe.

Welcome group B! I hope that our group will have lots of fun reading interesting books.
I'm excited so I hope you're excited too.

This Geronimo book was about a very interesting and very very important topic, love.
Love got Geronimo to do some crazy things that I had never imagined Geronimo to do.
I hope you really enjoy this book!
Au revoir

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anthropo 2012-08-26 21:12 

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sophie 2012-08-27 00:03:46
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sophie 2012-08-27 00:09:03
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À¯¼®¾ö¸¶ 2012-08-21 20:00 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:58:41
I'm happy you enjoyed this bookclub! I enjoyed it too!
You did very well for your last assignment and I feel you'll continue to do well.
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-08-21 23:05:41
À¯¼®ÀÌ ÀÌŸ® ¿©Çà Àß ´Ù³à¿ÔÁÒ? Áö³­¹ø ±Û¿¡¼­ ¾ê±âÇߴµ¥, ÁÁÀº ±¸°æ ¸¹ÀÌ ÇÏ°í ¿Ô°Ú³×¿ä.^^
Àúµµ µÎ ½Ü°ú ¹Ì¼Ç ÇÔ²² ¸øÇؼ­ ¸¹ÀÌ ¾Æ½¬¿îµ¥ À¯¼®ÀÌ´Â °°Àº ³²ÀÚ? ÇüÀ̶ó ´õ ±×·² ¼ö ÀÖ°Ú¾î¿ä. ¸ÚÁø Ãß¾ï°ú ÇÔ²² 2Çб⵵ Àß °èȹÇÒ °Å¶ó »ý°¢µÇ³×¿ä. °è¼Ó ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÇÕ´Ï´Ù..^^
Çý´Ï¸¾ 2012-08-21 10:32 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:57:45
Neat work! What great work you've presented me with on the last day of the Geronimo series.
This is impressive and you should feel very proud.
Keep being impressive and keep up the hard work!
sophie 2012-08-21 23:23:43
Çý´Ï°¡ Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð¸¦ Àç¹Õ°Ô ÀÐ°í ±Û ¾´ °Ô ¾ÆÁÖ ±â¾ï¿¡ ¿À·¡ ³²À» °Å °°³×¿ä.^^ ±× µ¿¾È ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇØÁá´Ù°í ĪÂù ¸¹ÀÌ ÇÏ°í¿ä, »õ ½Ã¸®Áî¿¡¼­µµ ¸ÚÁö°Ô Àß ÇҰŶó ±â´ëµÇ¾î¿ä.
Çô´ÏÈĴϸ¾ 2012-08-20 22:11 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:54:54
I like how you're determined to do well when the bookclub starts fresh!
I feel like you'll do but I do wish that if were longer.
I hope you do that next time but don't get me wrong, you're work is fine!
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-08-21 23:28:39
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¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-20 17:36 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:51:52
1ºü! Good work. I see you've put in much effort into your work.
I feel like you'll continue to do well and impress others.
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-08-21 23:40:32
ºñÅ°°¡ ¹æÇÐ ¸¶¹«¸®¸¦ ¾ÆÁÖ Áñ°Ì°Ô Àß ÇÏ°í ¿Ô±º¿ä! Àç¹Õ°Ô ³î¸é¼­ ÇØÆĸ®µµ Àâ¾Ò´Ù´Âµ¥,, ¾ÆÁÖ ¹°ÄÈÇÑ Á¾·ù´Â ¾Æ´Ï¾ú³ª ºÁ¿ä. ^^ ÇÔ²² Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð Àß ³¡³»¼­ Àúµµ ±â»Ú°í, ´ÙÀ½ Ã¥¿¡¼­ ºñÅ°ÀÇ ¸ÚÁø ±Û ¼Ø¾¾ ¸¹ÀÌ ±â´ëÇÏ°í ÀÖ¾î¿ä.
ÀÛÀº ¿ÀÇØ,,, ¼ÒÇÇ°¡ ´ñ±ÛÀº (Sophie: ÀÌ·¸°Ô ½ÃÀÛÇϴµ¥) °ÅÀÇ ¾È ½è°Åµç¿ä. ÇÒ ¸»ÀÌ ¾ø´Ù´Âµ¥ ¾ïÁö·Î ¾²°Ô Çϱâ Èûµé´õ¶ó±¸¿ä. ±×·¡¼­ ´ëºÎºÐ Á¦°¡(¼ÒÇǸ¾) ½è´ä´Ï´Ù. Æò¼Ò ±Û¾²±â ½È¾îÇÏ´Â ¸ð½À ±×´ë·Î ´ñ±Ûµµ Èûµé¾îÇÕ´Ï´Ù. ¤Ì¤Ì
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-08-20 13:40 

 

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BYE BYE see you again~!¡Ù^^

¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-20 17:38:34
ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ ¹ÝÀå µÈ°Å ³Ñ³Ñ ÃàÇÏÇØ~^^
µ¿±Û µ¿±Û ±Í¿±°í ÀÚ¿¬½º·± ¹Ì¼Ç±Û º¸·¯ °¡²û ³î·¯°¥²².. ȱÆÃ!
WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:50:03
ÈÖÀ±, I hope you understand the responsibilities of a leader!
I feel like you'll do well and I'm looking forward to it.
Your work above is consistent and fine. Keep it up!
sophie 2012-08-21 23:44:02
ºÐ¹ÝµÈ´ÙÇؼ­ ¾Æ½¬¿ü´Âµ¥, ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ´Â ¾ó¸¶ ¾È ÀÖ¾î 6°³¿ù µÚ?¿¡ ´Ù½Ã ¸¸³ª°Ú³×¿ä. ¾î´À ¹æÀÌµç ´Ã »ý±â ³ÑÄ¡´Â ÈÖÀ±ÀÌÀÇ È°¾àÀÌ ²À ÇÊ¿äÇϴٴϱî¿ä!! ^^ Á¦·Î´Ï¸ðµµ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÇÏ´À¶ó ¼ö°í ¸¹¾Ò¾î¿ä. °ð ´Ù½Ã ºÁ¿ä.^^
Grace¸¾ 2012-08-20 01:34 

Á¦·Î´Ï¸ðµµ ÀÌÁ¦ ¸¶Áö¸·À̳׿ä.  ±×·¹À̽º°¡ ÇÑâ Àç¹ÌºÙÀ̸ç Àаí ÀÖ´øÁßÀ̶ó Á» ¾Æ½±½À´Ï´Ù...

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¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-20 17:39:53
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±×·¹À̽º´Â ¾ÕÀ¸·Î °è¼Ó º¼ ¼ö ÀÖ¾î ÁÁ³×¿ä. ÇÔ²² ¿­½ÉÈ÷ Çսôç~^^
WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:49:05
I feel like you'll do very well in A¹Ý as well.
Your work proves it because it's neat and comprehensive.
Keep it up!
sophie 2012-08-21 23:52:47
Àç¹Õ´Â Á¦·Î´Ï¸ðÁö¿ä? ¹Ì¼ÇÀº ³¡³ªµµ ±×·¹À̽º¿¡°Õ ´Ù½Ã ¿©·¯¹ø ÀÐ°í ½ÍÀº Ã¥ÀÌ°Ú¾î¿ä.
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sophie 2012-08-19 23:06 

Àç¿ø½Ü, ¾Ë·º½º½Ü ¼ö°íÇØÁÖ°í °è½Åµ¥,, ÀÌ·¸°Ô ºÐ¹ÝÀÌ µÈ´Ù´Ï ¸¹ÀÌ ¾Æ½±½À´Ï´Ù. °è¼Ó ÃʵîÀÌ°í ½Í¾î¶ó~~~

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Grace¸¾ 2012-08-20 01:43:53
±×µ¿¾È sophie's questionÀ» Çϴ¶ó °í»ý ¸¹¾ÒÁÒ? Ç×»ó °í¸¿°í ´ë°ßÇÏ°Ô »ý°¢ÇÏ°í ÀÖ¾î¿ä.
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¹Ù´Ùº° 2012-08-20 17:41:55
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¾ÕÀ¸·Î a¹Ý¿¡¼­ °è¼Ó ¸ÚÁø ¼±¹è ¸ð½ÀÀ» º¸¿©ÁÖ±æ!
Çý´Ï¸¾ 2012-08-21 10:13:39
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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:47:26
Sophie, you've done so wonderfully well as a leader in this bookclub.
It's sad that we're going to have to say goodbye.
I know you'll do well in the more advanced group and your work proves it.
Keep doing well!
ÃÊ·Ï»ç°ú 2012-08-19 02:15 

4Çгâ Lisa¿¹¿ä

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sophie 2012-08-19 23:47:42
½Ã¸®ÁîÀÇ ¸¶Áö¸· Ã¥À» ÇÑ´Ù´Â °Í¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ¾ö¸¶¿Í ¾ÆÀÌÀÇ ´À³¦Àº ¸¹ÀÌ ´Ù¸¥ °Í °°¾Æ¿ä. ^^
Àúµµ Á» ´õ ½Å°æ½á¼­ ÇØÁÖ±æ ¹Ù·¨´Âµ¥,, ^^
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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:45:10
This is really neat and I think you've done very well.
A nice way to end the series for sure!
Keep it up!
ÇÏÇÏÇüÁ¦ 2012-08-16 18:53 

5Çгâ ÀåÁÖÇÏÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ^^

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Àç¿ø½Ü´Ô°ú ¾Ë·¢½º½Ü´Ô²² °¨»çµå·Á¿ä.

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º¸¹°1È£ 2012-08-17 09:51:15
ÁÖÇϱº~¹æÇÐ Àß º¸³»°í ÀÖÁö¿ä? 2Çб⸦ À§ÇÑ ÃæÀüµµ »§»§È÷ ÇÏ°í ÀÖ³ª¿ä?
Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð ¸¶Áö¸· ¹Ì¼Ç±îÁö Âü Àß Çس½ ÁÖÇϱº¿¡°Ô ĪÂùÀÇ ¹Ú¼ö º¸³»¿ä. ¦¦¦!!!
ÇÏÇÏÇüÁ¦´Ô ¸»¾¸Ã³·³, ÀÌ ¸ðµç °ÍÀÌ ÇÔ²² Çϱ⠶§¹®¿¡ °¡´ÉÇÑ °Í °°¾Æ¿ä.
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sophie 2012-08-19 23:52:28
±×·¯´Ï±î¿ä... Àç¹Õ´Ù°í ÁÁ¾ÆÇÒ ¶§´Â ¾ðÁ¦°í, ¸¶Áö¸·¿¡ ´Ù´Þ¾Æ¼­´Â Á¦·Î´Ï¸ð°¡ ³Ê¹« Áö³ªÄ¡°Ô °ÆÁ¤ÀÌ ¸¹´Ù³ª ¾î·´Ù³ª ÀÌ·³¼­ ºÒ¸¸À» Ç¥½ÃÇÏ´õ¶ó±¸¿ä. ¤¾¤¾
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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:44:31
You've finished off the Geronimo Stilton series very well.
I'm looking forward to reading your work later on different books.
Keep it up!
º¸¹°1È£ 2012-08-16 11:33 

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sophie 2012-08-20 00:01:35
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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:36:43
Lucy, you've done very well in this bookclub and you will be missed.
I know you'll continuously do well at an even higher level.
Keep it up! Your work here is marvelous as well!
±¸±¸½º 2012-08-15 19:52 

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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:35:11
So neat wow!
Your work is impressively well done and you should feel very proud.
Your content is good and I see you're continuously showing quality work.
Keep it up!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-08-21 22:32:12
Wow! Impressive! This is quite good indeed.
You should be happy with your work because it has quality.
Keep it up!

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