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[12][B¹Ý] - Ready Freddy #2

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Class B, how is it going?
Is everyone excited to start off a good and solid year?
I'm excited to meet some new faces and to see new and fresh work!
I know you've already started off, but I haven't really seen your work, so I'm excited! Woohoo!!!

This Ready Freddy book was quite good and interesting.
It was much easier to understand than Geronimo, for those who were in the previous bookclub.
I really felt the essence of what a first year grade boy would do.

Be careful of the hurricane everyone!
Stay home and be safe on Tuesday! It's important to do that!
Be safe and have fun on this assignment!

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Good to see your face ÇÁ¸®´Ù!
You must be a very good guitar player. I wish I were good at an instrument.
For a first start, your work is very very good. I'm very impressed.
Keep it up! Wow! Keep impressing me!
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¾ÆÀ̸°, nice to see you and good start!
That hamster is really cute. I like hamsters, too!
Your work is solid and if your work is slightly longer with more sentences and neater, all will be well. Keep up the good work!
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WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:31:25
Hi Delphie! Nice to meet you!
Solid start and your work is very neat and tidy as well.
Your English is really good as well! Nice!
Keep up this good work!
Çô´ÏÈĴϸ¾ 2012-09-02 22:39 

ÃÊ3 Brian

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¿ï µþµµ »çÀü ã´Â Àç¹Ì¿¡ ½Ã°£°¡´Â ÁÙ ¸ô¶ó¿ä ¤¾¤¾¤¾
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¿Áµ¹ÀÌ 2012-09-03 07:45:40
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humanmi 2012-09-03 11:42:08
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WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:24:56
Hi Brian. Good start!
A solid start and I'll tell you one thing, your work is very neat! That's really good!
If your work is slightly longer with more sentences, all will be well.
Keep up the good work!
Åõºó»ç¶û 2012-09-02 22:25 

ÃÊ5 ÇÁ¸°½º

 

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Çູ¾¾ 2012-09-02 23:16:05
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ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-09-03 00:58:15
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ÇÁ¸°½ºµµ ÈÖÀ±À̶û °°Àº 5ÇгâÀÌ¶ó¼­ ´Ã °ü½ÉÀÌ°¡³×¿ä^^
¿Áµ¹ÀÌ 2012-09-03 07:59:16
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±×¸²ÀÌ ¸ðµç °ÍÀ» º¸¿©Áֳ׿ä.
humanmi 2012-09-03 11:35:39
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WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:21:02
Hi ÇÁ¸°½º, nice to meet you.
I like taekwondo, too! I used to do it as well.
A good and solid start, indeed. Good job.
If your work is slightly longer with more sentences and neater, all will be well.
Keep up the good work!
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-09-02 00:35 

-ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ  µ¿¿µ»ó ¸µÅ©°É¾îº¾´Ï´Ù.(¾¦¾¦¿¡ ¿Ã¸®±â°¡ ¾î·Á¿ò,,¸î¹ø½Ãµµ ³¡¿¡ Æ÷±â)

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Åõºó»ç¶û 2012-09-02 22:28:17
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Àú·¸°Ô ÀÌ»Ú°Ô ¿Ê´Â µþÀ» µÎ¼Å¼­ ³Ê¹« ÇູÇϽðھî¿ä.
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¿Áµ¹ÀÌ 2012-09-03 07:54:25
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humanmi 2012-09-03 11:47:56
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WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:19:49
Well, Mrs. President this is fabulous.
I love those drawings; they're really cute!
Your work is very good and you've always impressed me so I'm just going to the say the same.
I hope you take great pride in being the student leader! I'm confident you'll do well!
Keep it up!
ÃÊ·Ï»ç°ú 2012-09-01 18:03 

ÃÊ4 Lisa

¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä. ¿À´ÃÀº ¾ö¸¶°¡ ¾Æ´Ñ Lisa°¡ Àû°í ÀÖ¾î¿ä.

¿À´Ã »õ·Î ¾È°æÀ» ÇÏ°í ¿Ô¾î¿ä. Á¤¸» ¸¶À½¿¡ µé¾î¿ä.

À̹ø Ready Freddy´Â  Àç¹Õ°í  ²Ï ½±´õ¶ó°í¿ä,,

 

ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-09-03 01:09:10
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¿¹»Û ¸®»ç »õ¾È°æ¾²°í »çÁøÇÑÀå ¿Ã·ÁÁÖ½ÃÁö¿ä~
¿ì¸®Áý µþ¼Âµµ ¸ðµÎ ¾È°æÀ» ¾²°íÀÖ¾î¿ä,¤Ì¤Ì
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¿µ¾î½Ç·Âµµ ÁÁ¾Æ¼­ Ä£±¸µéÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ ºÎ·¯¿öÇÏ°Ú¾î¿ä~
¿Áµ¹ÀÌ 2012-09-03 07:05:58
Àå¹®À» ¿¹»Û ±Û¾¾·Î Á¤¸» Àß ¾²´Â±º¿ä.
¿µ¾îµµ Àß ÇÏ°í ¹Ì¼Çµµ ¼ºÀÇ ÀÖ°Ô ÇÏ°í
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ÃÊ·Ï»ç°ú 2012-09-03 13:06:40
¸®»ç´« ½Ã·ÂÀÌ ³Ñ ³ªºü¿ä ¤Ð¤Ð ´« ¾È³ªºüÁö´Â Ưȿ¾à ¾øÀ»±î¿ä ^^;;
º´¿ø¿¡°¡µµ ¾ÆÁÖ ÄðÇÏ°Ô ¾È°æ¾²´Ù°¡ ¼ö¼úÇÏ¸é µÇ¿ä °ÆÁ¤¸¶¼¼¿ä.. ÀÌ·¯½Ã³×¿ä ¤Ð¤Ð
WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:18:18
¸®»ç, your work is very neat and what a great start!
You've seen me comment on your work before so I'm sure you know I'll be praising you.
Great job and keep it up!
¼­¾ØÀ± 2012-08-31 04:06 

Sally´Â Show and Tell¿¡ ¼Ò°³ÇÒ °ÍÀÌ ¾ø´Ù¸ç ½É°¢ÇÏ°Ô °í¹ÎÇß´ä´Ï´Ù.¤»

½ÃÅ°Áö ¾Ê¾Æµµ Ã¥ ÀÐ°í ¹Ì¼Çµµ ÇÏ°í... ½Å±âÇϳ׿ä.

Ready, Freddy! ³Ñ Àç¹ÌÀÖ´ë¿ä.

ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-08-31 10:38:21
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°è¼ÓÇؼ­ ºÏŬ·´À» Áñ±â´Â »ø¸®ÀÇ ¸ð½À ±â´ëÇÕ´Ï´Ù.^^
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humanmi 2012-09-03 11:51:09
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¾î¶²»ö Çß¾î¿ä?
¿ì¸® 6Çг⠾ð´Ïµµ ¾ðÁ¦ ¾È½ÃÄѵµ ¸®»çó·³ ÇÒ¶û°­...
WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:17:11
Hi Sally, nice to meet you!
Your work is quite good for a first start. Though I do wish it were neater.
If your work is slightly longer with more sentences, all will be well.
Keep up the good work!
¼­¾ØÀ± 2012-09-07 20:06:45
´ñ±Û ¸ðµÎ °¨»çÇØ¿ä. Å« °Ý·Á°¡ µÇ³×¿ä.
±Û¾¾´Â Àú¸¦ ´à¾Ò³ªºÁ¿ä. ³ë·ÂÇغ»´Ù°í ÇÕ´Ï´ç^^
¿Áµ¹ÀÌ 2012-08-30 20:20 

¿Áµ¹ÀÌ 2012-08-30 20:29:59
I'm Michael, and in third grade.
It's nice to meet you(though we really didn't meet each other).
I'll do my best on my worksheet.

ÄÄÇ»ÅÍ Á¶ÀÛÀÌ ¼­Åø·¯ ¼÷Á¦¿Í °°ÀÌ ¸»À» ¿Ã¸®Áö ¸øÇÏ°í µû·Î ³²ÀÌ ¾²µíÀÌ ´ñ±Û·Î ¾²´Â ºñ¾Ö....
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ÇÑ µÎ ¹ø ÇÏ´Ùº¸¸é ´Ã°ÚÁö¿ä.
ÈÖÀ±¸¾ 2012-08-30 23:05:49
¿Áµ¹ÀÌ´Ô°ú ¸¶ÀÌŬÀÌ ³Ñ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÇϽô ¸ð½À Âü~ º¸±âÁÁ½À´Ï´Ù.^^
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¼­¾ØÀ± 2012-08-31 04:14:37
3ÇгâÀ̶ó´Ï ³î¶ø³×¿ä. ÀÛ³âºÎÅÍ Á¤Ã¼±â¸¦ °Þ´Â ¿ïµþ°ú Àú¿¡°Ô ½Å¼±ÇÑ ÀÚ±ØÀÌ µÇ³×¿ä...^^
ÃÊ·Ï»ç°ú 2012-09-01 18:07:22
Lisa: óÀ½ Àε¥ ÀßÇß¾î 1µî ÃàÇÏÇØ!!!
humanmi 2012-09-03 11:54:15
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WFS JaeWon 2012-09-03 22:16:25
Hello Michael, it's nice to meet you.
Your work isn't bad for a first start. Your english is quite good!
If your work is slightly longer with more sentences and neater, all will be well.
Keep up the good work!
humanmi 2012-08-28 12:24 

Ready Freddy book is fun than I thought.

It's like a Junie B.Jones.

Junie B.Jone is my faverite book.

Now Ready Freddy book is my faverite book too.

 

I'm careful with the hurricane.

but I"m little scare.

 

I'll do my best on assignment~

 


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 [A¹Ý] Frindle

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