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역시나 완벽한, 손댈 곳이 없는 일기~!
처음부터 끝까지 도무지 고칠 곳이 없네요. 스펠링, 문법, 대문자쓰기, 띄어쓰기 등
꼼꼼한 재윤이 성격답게 완벽합니다. 한 두군데 수정이 필요한 곳은 아마 타이핑 실수일듯.
첫 부분의 especially 때문에 문장을 다시 배치한 것 외에는
수정할 부분이 없습니다. 수고하셨어요.^^
<I want to go to Europe>
I want to travel Europe. Especially I want to visit France, Italy, Spain, and England.
I want to travel Europe, especially France, Italy, Spain, and England.
especially 는 문장에서의 위치가 약간 달라져야 합니다.
그래서 두 문장을 통합해서 위와 같이 수정을 해봤어요.
And Austria, and Germany.
My dad has been in Germany on business.
So we will go to see him on March for five weeks.
We are going to travel Germaany, France, Italy, and Austria.
If Mozart were alive, I would want to meet him.
I want to eat pizza in Italy and sausage in Germany.
Looking at the Eiffel tower would be fantastic!
Europe, here I come!!!
This is where we're going.
: 재윤맘님의 글입니다.
방학이 다 끝나가네요. 일기를 많이 쓰지 못해서 오늘 한편 또 쓰라고 했어요.3월에 유럽에 갈 예정이어서 거기에 대한 일기를 썼네요.숙제로 낼 거라고 지도까지 붙여가며...스캔하고 보니까 스펠링 틀린 것이 꽤 있네요. ㅠㅠ <I want to go to Europe>I want to travel Europe. Especially I want to visit France, Italy, Spain, and England.And Austria, and Germany.My dad has been in Germany on business.So we will go to see him on March for five weeks.We are going to travei Germaany, France, Italy, and Austria.If Mozart were alive, I would want to meet him.I want to eat pizza in Italy and sausage in Germany.Looking at the Eiffel tower would be fantastic!Europe, here I come!!!This is where we're going.
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