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µî·ÏÀÏ 2011-08-08 16:39

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What's up boys and girls of the best bookclub in the world?

Aren't you guys just tired of rain? I am.

Here is something that will make you happy.

Book assignment!!!

 

Here is the sixth book of the Marvin Redpost series.

I enjoyed because it had a surprising storyline.

I hope you have fun!

 

Good luck!

 

P.S, could you pay more attention to grammar when you write your answers?

Especially on tenses of verbs.

Thank you


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sophie 2011-08-16 11:01:32
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-21 22:29:03
Neat work, Grace!
I like reading your work because it is neat and impressive.
I really appreciate the hard work Grace!
Hope you keep enjoying our bookclub!
Áö¿ø¼­Áø¸¾ 2011-08-15 19:05 

 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-15 20:53:04
Hey Alice, Good work! I kind of wish your answers were a little longer.
Good quality work and good improvement!
I appreciate your hard work!
sophie 2011-08-16 11:11:22
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ÁÖ¿ï 2011-08-15 15:53 

JennyApple   ÃÊ5

 

1 Vocabualry

Write    Write  your own sentences using the given words or expressions. You can see the example sentences from the specified pages of the book.

 

 

 

 

I.                   Reading Comprehension

Answer the following questions below. Please pay attention to the tense of each question.

 

1.    1  Why does Nick have a bad impression on Joe? What event led to Nick being embarrassed in front of his classmates

 

 

1.      2 Marvin feels bad for Joe because other students call him Dorky. Why does Marvin feel afraid about him trying to be Joe¡¯s friend?

 

1.      4 What important event makes Joe popular among all his classmates?

 

I.                  

 

 

 

Free Response Question

 

The title of the book doesn¡¯t seem to relate to the story very well at first sight. But there must have been a reason why the author of the book named the book A Flying Birthday Cake. Let¡¯s think about why.

 

In my opinion Mr. Louis Sachar was trying to make us think Joe might be an alien even though he didn¡¯t tell about it directly in the book. Joe must have landed on Earth by a flying object shaped like a birthday cake. Do you agree or not?

 

If you agree, write Joe¡¯s behaviors that misled us to think he¡¯s from other planet. If you don¡¯t agree, write what a Flying Birthday cake has anything to do with a new student named Joe Normal.

 

The title of the book doesn¡¯t seem to relate to the story very well at first sight. But there must have been a reason why the author of the book named the book A Flying Birthday Cake. Why do you think Mr. Louis Sachar named the title of this book A Flying Birthday Cake? What does a Flying Birthday cake have anything to do with a new student named Joe Normal?

 

sophie 2011-08-15 17:48:30
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-15 20:48:41
Hey JennyApple, I think it's marvelous how you compared Joe to a green vegetable cake!
That's really creative! Good job. I'm definitely seeing great improvement!
I appreciate your hard work!
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kevin(4th)

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sophie 2011-08-15 17:54:49
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-15 20:46:28
Hey Kevin, I think it's wonderful how you thought that wizzle-fish tag was a game from outer space.
I like the creative answers and I am seeing great improvement.
I appreciate your hard work!
Jenn 2011-08-14 22:54 

ÃÊ3 EugeneÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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literacy 2011-08-15 10:32:41
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-15 20:44:44
Hey Eugene, I love how you thought that Joe's limousine had changed into a UFO. That's brilliant.
I see good improvement and well thought-out answers.
I appreciate your hard work!
½º¸¶ÀÏ°É 2011-08-14 22:10 

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literacy 2011-08-15 10:36:57
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-15 20:42:03
Hey ½º¸¶ÀÏ°É, neat work! I always like to read organized work.
Your answers are very descriptive and I am definitely seeing great improvement from you.
I appreciate your hard work!
sophie 2011-08-14 10:41 

¿­½ÉÈ÷ Çß½À´Ï´Ù.

 

WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:51:14
Wow! Good effort! I love how you listed 6 reasons why Joe is not an alien.
I can definitely congratulate you on such hard and great work!
Keep up the good work!
Jenn 2011-08-14 23:01:32
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literacy 2011-08-15 10:39:45
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1. Why does Nick have a bad impression on Joe? What event led to Nick being embarrassed in fron of classmates?

A) Because at first he didn't like Joe. and He was more upset he was sitting sight of him. And he beat Nick on the wall-bakk. That's why.

 

2. Marvin feels bad for Joe because other students call him Dorky. Why does Marvin feel afraid about him trying to be Joe's friend?

A) Because when he talk to them He would be called dorky's friend. so he was a little don't want to talk about it.

 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:49:53
Good work Eric! I wish you could write more neatly with your handwriting, though.
I'm happy to see the good work and improvement from you.
Keep up the good work!
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I.                  

Name _________________________  Grade: __________________

First, Edgar Degas was born in Paris, France, on July 19, 1834.

 

Vocabulary

 

Write your own sentences using the given words or expressions. You can see the example

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sentences from the specified pages of the book.

beneath

2

The boat sank beneath the waves

a show-off

5

He is such a show-off

attitude

6

A band with attitude

be attached to

10

Be attached to puppy

several more times

13

This is a film I want to see several more times

practically

17

Sell for practically nothing

know what it was like to ~

23

I know what it was like to fight with friends

one at a time

27

Add 2 eggs, one at a time

stop short

30

He stop short when he remember his name

Besides,

31

The hospital is besides to the red house and blue house

move around

35

Don¡¯t move around at night

take one¡¯s eyes off of

38

She take one¡¯s eyes off of him

sticky

39

¡°Hey, um¡¦ are that pudding is sticky??¡±

¡°No, sir¡±

admire

41

I admire my cousin brothers

assure

55

I assure myself of he¡¯s safety

fit in

57

fit in with the facts

notice

71

I notice he was walking to here

I.                   Reading Comprehension

Answer the following questions below. Please pay attention to the tense of each question.

 

 

1.      Why does Nick have a bad impression on Joe? What event led to Nick being embarrassed in front of his classmates?

 

Joes said to Mrs. North that she looks like a great teacher and he wand to learn as much as he can. And he was better at the wall-ball.

And he kisses on the flagpole and he wore the same clothes every day.

And he got forgot word ¡°elephant¡±

So nick said ¡°duh¡± but his teacher said that¡¯s not what he said

And he said how much human¡¯s brain weigh

 

2.      Marvin feels bad for Joe because other students call him Dorky. Why does Marvin feel afraid about him trying to be Joe¡¯s friend?

 

He wanted to be Joe¡¯s friend

But his classmates were going to pick on him again

And then if Joe move back to Chicago

Marvin will be so friendless

And Joe tried to be like other friends.

So he was watching movies and read books about Marvin city

 

3.      Why couldn¡¯t Joe make many good friends? What did he try to do to become good friends with the students in Marvin¡¯s school?

 

The Joe couldn¡¯t make many friends

Because he taught his weird and different

And tried to watching movies and read books about Marvin¡¯s city

 

4.      What important event makes Joe popular among all his classmates?

 

His nose on the flagpole and everybody thought he was kissing the flagpole

But he was not

He like the way the cool ****l feels when it squashes his nose.

Joe taught game name ¡°Wizzle-fish¡±

And Marvin taught that game to classmates. And everybody like that game

So that¡¯s why Joe became popular

 

II.                Free Response Question

 

The title of the book doesn¡¯t seem to relate to the story very well at first sight. But there must have been a reason why the author of the book named the book A Flying Birthday Cake. Let¡¯s think about why.

 

In my opinion Mr. Louis Sachar was trying to make us think Joe might be an alien even

though he didn¡¯t tell about it directly in the book. Joe must have landed on Earth by a flying object shaped like a birthday cake. Do you agree or not?

 

If you agree, write Joe¡¯s behaviors that misled us to think he¡¯s from other planet. If you don¡¯t agree, write what a Flying Birthday cake has anything to do with a new student named Joe Normal.

 

The title of the book doesn¡¯t seem to relate to the story very well at first sight. But there must have been a reason why the author of the book named the book A Flying Birthday Cake. Why do you think Mr. Louis Sachar named the title of this book A Flying Birthday Cake? What does a Flying Birthday cake have anything to do with a new student named Joe Normal?

 

Landed on earth by a flying object shaped like a birthday cake

I thought he is alien is because he wore the same clothes everyday, he wanted to sleep on the floor, he didn¡¯t ever eat jell-o and he like pressed his nose on flagpole

And I don¡¯t know about country has movies and book

And he do wall-ball at first time but he was good at wall-ball

I think he came at another planet so he act being human

 

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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:48:29
Hey ¹Ì¸£, I think Joe is an alien, too. Glad to see your thoughts and my thoughts are similar.
Good job and glad to see you are improving.
Keep up the good work!
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:46:46
Hey Mickey, I love puzzles too!
I love the descriptiveness on the free response question.
great job and I am seeing good improvement from you!
Keep up the good work!
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:45:32
Good work Hera! I love how you thought he was alien by paying attention to the details in the book.
Good descriptive answers and I'm seeing good improvement!
Keep up the good work!
Jenn 2011-08-14 23:27:09
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:36:37
Neat work ÈÖÀ±! I can definitely see that you've put in much effort on your work!
Great job and great improvement! I love the pictures!
Keep up the good work!
literacy 2011-08-15 10:54:57
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:31:14
Hey Á¶Àº, doesn't "Marvin's new friend Joe" seem a little too simple?
Anyways, good work and good improvement!
Keep up the good work!
literacy 2011-08-15 10:58:44
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WFS JaeWon 2011-08-14 15:25:18
ÇÏÀ̵ð, good work!
I agreed that Joe could have been an alien, too.
Your answers are satisfactory and you are improving.
Keep up the good work!
literacy 2011-08-15 11:01:31
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